| "To Summon a Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 16:46 EST
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very good chapter
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 16:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, throwing Kikyou into the story isn't so bad. Its whatever devious plan she has in mind that has me on edge! An aging potion? A 500 year reunion? I'm wondering if the mate she's referring to is InuYasha or Naraku. Or perhaps even someone else, who knows! And speaking of mates...Miroku's mate is a demon. That shakes things up a bit because Sango isn't. Or maybe she is? I'm defenitely eager to see what you have in store! The ending to this chapter was pretty cute, by the way. We get to see Souta who has this endearing obsession with Halloween already taking a liking to InuYasha, Kagome's grandpa being old (maybe I just think this, but angry old people are freakin' cute), and then Kagome wraps it up by watching InuYasha interacting with her family (minus Momma). But I'm curious about that "dark" look he got on his face when she refused him. As always, until next chapter! ~Amber ;)
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Reviewed By: SailorKagome On: November 21, 2008 16:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why,on earth,did Kikyo had to butt in the story? I bet she is after InuYasha.And she is using magic in order to maintain her young form??? What a bitch!!!! I hope InuYasha will stick with Kagome.Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 12:57 EST
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True. So I should be saying... How kind of you to leave me hanging, right? I thank you for showing me the error of my ways. But it still doesn't make it any easier to bear! Finally, some clothes for our nudy Inu. And this Kikyo has my on edge. I AIN'T LIKIN' IT ONE BIT! Awesome chapter, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 12:40 EST
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Oooh, I am officially intrigued about Kikyo... Awww and seeing InuYasha all concerned and loving is SWEET! I laughed my little butt off to read him explaining math... can you send him to my place when I start going after my Masters? I'm sure they'll make me take SOME math and I hate hate hate it. This is a *fantastic* chapter. I giggled, I groaned, I was drawn in and have SO MANY QUESTIONS OMG! :) Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 10:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent as usual! I love how InuYasha isn't all about the sex, he cares about her, too! How sweet. Although the evil look he gave her when she said she didn't trust him is giving some serious foreshadowing, I can't wait! And don't worry about how good the lemon is. Honestly, I don't think people care much as long as it's there, ause the story does seem to have that kind of theme ^-^. One question. In the one chapter, he said he was 100,000 something years old, yet in this one you said he was 620. Which one is it? Not that I'm critisizing! He could be born twice for all I care, I was just wondering! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 04:10 EST
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hmmmm Kikyo makes an appearance. I wonder who she's waiting for? Or do I even have to wonder? I really like the characters interactions and I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 01:54 EST
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Oh boy...Kikyo's in it too >< This should be good. And what's up with Miroku?? Can't wait to find out ^^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 00:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! You're a wonderfull writer!!! Keep it up! ^_^
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 00:05 EST
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Hahaha! That last line made me go, "Oh Jesus!" Lmao!
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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 18:59 EST
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Awesome chapter! I am quite hooked on this story now and is going to toy with my every emotion.
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 01:07 EST
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AH! Holy shit! New chapter...NOW, please *makes puppy eyes* LOL. That's so not fair leaving it there >< And just what does that mark mean?? I really wanna know now. hehe ^^
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 00:28 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why have you stopped? please please tell me you are still working on it! i absoulutly love this story. this version of Inuyasha is something i really havent read about but i must admit that i do love him! so keep writing ok? cause if you dont its going to drive me insane! so do save my sanity and write!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 00:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah...Yash is definetely a super stud, lol. And I'm definetely liking this "amorous" version of him. I wonder about the Sango bit though and what Souta really saw in his dream. Hmmm...maybe next chapter? Till then! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 21:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heehee, you kill me with the hilarity... Anyhow, I'm still hooked and officially in love with this story. InuYasha's giving off the extremely-horny-hanyou-vibe...so it's kinda starting to make me wonder just how longer he can wait...and just what exactly he does while Kagome's gone...err, I'll shut up now 'cause I'm starting to sound pervy. *sheepish grin* But again, I love the story and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and where your plotline will take us. :) P.S. RUN, KAGOME! RUN LIKE THE WIND! ;D
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