| "Just a Joke, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: megan_9669 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2011 15:12 EST
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More plz i really enjoy it so far and love that its not naruto and sakura!!! so when u have time plz update |
Reviewed By: SakuraSasuke 4 ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2010 22:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiya, remember me? Well ofcourse you do, lolz. well first of all.... I loved the girl fluff, i so totally thought Naruto was going to fall on Hinat and then they'd give each other 'the look' [you know the romantic one all of us girls want] the Naruto or Hinata [it woud be cool if she would put the first move since she's so shy and all] would lean into each other... and BAM kiss. and then have Naruto hold her her hand standing her up and pulling her to him and be like "Hinata will you go out with me?" it would be so awesome... But anyways totally glad that you finally got Naru/Hina into here, such an adorable couple... but why Karaoke as the name? they didnt even Karaoke[did I spell that right] well I would def like to see what happens on their date next chapter, and you should really update, spring break was a long time ago... sorry for such a short review but I must be off, i might type another one later on for criticism, criticism is the best cuz it helps you improve and stuff... well your faithful reviewer. bye
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: April 06, 2010 20:57 EDT
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this chapter had a nice ring to it. i cant wait to see the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Sweettreat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2010 18:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, I really love this! :D I just found it and read all the chapters, and I'm really hoping that you'll continue it! I really need to know what happens next with Sasuke and Sakura:)
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2010 11:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww so cute.. reminds me of high school so much.. :)
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: January 04, 2010 20:18 EST
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if you need the spelling to be fixed you can send it to me so that i can proof read it and i can send it back so that people wont complain abt the spelling errors
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Reviewed By: SakuraSasuke 4 ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2009 13:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well like my other reviews this one is sure to be long, so take a seat. Well I am going to criticize some of your sentence, like the one were she answers in the mourning [I lazily picked up my phone and answered. "Hello." I said in a groggy, voice.] it could have been -- I lazily picked up my phone and answered with a groggy hello. it would have sounded more fluent in the writing. well now for the good news (that sentence is the only one I can remember at the moment ^-^') I really thought that it was cute how Naruto was going to ride a bike to the beach i was how cute! but there was a PREDICTABLE part you know when she ended up hitching up a ride with Sasuke, and the Motorcycle was really cool, it fit into the bad boy category. and the little bit of Hina/Naru action was wonderful,really wonderful!!!!. and when the Uchiha got his family jewels kicked I cracked up, it was hilarious, especially when Sakura didn't get it. Well idea time... I think that Naruto and Hinata's moment have started, you set it up beautifully I can't wait to see were this leads them too... I think that you should have had some of Sasuke's p.o.v I mean the dude did get hit in ... yup but then again a tad of him ignoring Sakura would be a bit were it seems this is going, as for Sakura's hug adorable (wait this is criticism... ooops) well I think Hinata should step up more to the plate, you know take charge, and not blush as mush, maybe lose a bit of her stutter, have Ino give her a make over or something. then you could have Naruto start checking her out, I still stand by Neji beating him up... Even if I do LOVE Naruto, but it would add a bit to comical part. well that's it...
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: December 31, 2009 00:33 EST
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im back again. nicechapter as always. cant wait for the next one
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Reviewed By: SakuraSasuke 4 ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 17:39 EDT
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im back!!!!!!!!! and getting ready to write a really long review so prepare yourself and take a seat. i loved this chapter but like i said you should put a switch on the bet like, having a regular bathing suit and i bikini on top, and have her be like im wearing a bikini happy, and have them get into a chicken fight or something like that so she could get back at ino but then something happened so she had to take off the bathing suit and she came out adorably blushing and for some reason sasuke couldnt stop staring at her. and maybe hinata should pretend to drown and naruto saves her giving her cpr and after he can lean in and kiss her and ends up asking her out neji gets mad and tries beating him up but one the girls get in accidently getting hit and having major injuries having the boys worry for them and thats when neji and sasuke begin to feel feelings for tenten and sakura but the girls are like who the heck are you. itd be really funny. and nice when the boys help get their memory back since they remember everyone else but them. id enjoy reading that. well i shall return to give you alot more reviews. i bet mine are the longest. hahahahaha. hopefully they are. well see you next chap. and to the next im SakuraSasuke 4 ever checking out. back to you AnimePrincessInuLover!!!!
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Reviewed By: sonicrider16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2009 22:02 EDT
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.....wud u please write more chapters
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: July 03, 2009 12:12 EDT
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...........im sorry but im done reviewing this damn story cus its been 3 months since last reviewed.......goodbye....
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 06:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, I'm back, and I've finally caught up on this fic. Now I'm going to do what's called a compliment sandwich. I start with something good then talk about where you need improvement, then end with something good again. First I continue to stand by what I've said before. The comedy and the orignality of this fic, is purely gold. Second, you , make tiny little spelling and grammar mistakes that just really tick me off, like in one chapter you spelled finger "fingre", I'm probably the only one who noticed that but hey I'm a grammar snob. Finnally, this story truly brings out your style as a writer.
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: June 11, 2009 21:11 EDT
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saturday huh? saturday august watever 2235? jesus over 2 freakin months and nothing? wat do u have finals that take 16 decades? god i really want 2 see the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: May 19, 2009 20:19 EDT
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hopefully saturday cus thats memorial day weekend
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover (not logged in On: May 06, 2009 23:52 EDT
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SORRY GUYS! I'v been REALLY REALLY busy. plase forgive me! I shall update this saturday.
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