| "Just a Joke, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 06:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, I'm back, and I've finally caught up on this fic. Now I'm going to do what's called a compliment sandwich. I start with something good then talk about where you need improvement, then end with something good again. First I continue to stand by what I've said before. The comedy and the orignality of this fic, is purely gold. Second, you , make tiny little spelling and grammar mistakes that just really tick me off, like in one chapter you spelled finger "fingre", I'm probably the only one who noticed that but hey I'm a grammar snob. Finnally, this story truly brings out your style as a writer.
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: June 11, 2009 21:11 EDT
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saturday huh? saturday august watever 2235? jesus over 2 freakin months and nothing? wat do u have finals that take 16 decades? god i really want 2 see the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: May 19, 2009 20:19 EDT
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hopefully saturday cus thats memorial day weekend
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover (not logged in On: May 06, 2009 23:52 EDT
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SORRY GUYS! I'v been REALLY REALLY busy. plase forgive me! I shall update this saturday.
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Reviewed By: GIGI101 On: May 06, 2009 21:04 EDT
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..............................................................chapters please........................................:(
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: May 05, 2009 17:29 EDT
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..............................................................chapters please........................................:(
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: April 26, 2009 11:38 EDT
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.............im really becoming impatient...more chapters please :(
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Reviewed By: GIGI010 On: April 17, 2009 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Ooh...shiny
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter from a great author. write me soon. I know where you live...it's earth. May not sound like much but it actally narrows it down alot.
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Title: Interesting...
Reviewed By: TailsPrower (unlogged) On: April 09, 2009 12:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic! I like it. Although (sorry) you're spelling needs a lot of help. Good job though!
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: April 06, 2009 22:26 EDT
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almost a month...but still good ^_^ if u have spring break next week perfect time to type up more chapters u shud make the characters swear more makes the story more funny cant wait til next chapter
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Reviewed By: yuyu4848 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 09:07 EDT
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This was a really good chapter. Keep up the good work! Update soon too!
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: April 04, 2009 13:26 EDT
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please update soon :(
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: April 02, 2009 17:59 EDT
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wow anymore days and ill die please do more chapters please
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Title: READ IT AND LOVE IT
Reviewed By: happy camper On: April 01, 2009 13:35 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i l-o-v-e is story i love it i love it i love it write more i whant to find out what happen's
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