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"The Point of the Story" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ]
 Reviewed By: renegaderaine [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 27, 2009 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I wasn't sure I'd like the pairing. Mixing my favorite anime with one I consider to be not quite up to par with it, but I must admit, you stayed very true to the characters. It was a beautiful blending of the two series. I found myself willing Hiei to acknowledge his feelings for her. Bravo. 10s all across from me, and I look forward to reading others by you.
 Title: A perfect introduction into the fandom
Reviewed By: renegaderaine [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 27, 2009 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I wasn't sure I'd like the pairing. Mixing my favorite anime with one I consider to be not quite up to par with it, but I must admit, you stayed very true to the characters. I found myself willing Hiei to acknowledge his feelings for her. Bravo. 10s all across from me, and I look forward to reading others by you.
 Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2009 17:05 CDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
 Title: Silver Hair FOREVER!!!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2009 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'll tell you I've never read this pairing before. The story was well written and brings both series to mind. You'll proably be the only h/k fic I'll ever read too. (off to fluffy land tra la la la la la)
 Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2009 04:30 CST
Comment/Review:
this was good
 Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2009 09:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Congratulations Madmiko-your story 'The Point of the Story' has been nominated for "Best Crossover" and "Best One Shot" at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again!
 Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 14, 2008 22:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Another great piece from you. This one had deeper themes, and I really really liked it. It makes so much sense that Hiei would be the one Enki would demand do his dirty work. How disgusting of Enma. "Let's let her be tortured until she coughs up the info, then 'rescue her.' I enjoyed a nice fantasy of Shippo, Kouga and most especially, Lord Sesshoumaru, kicking Enma around. I think Sesshoumaru in his natural form would be powerful enough to get his displeasure across even against king Enma.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 04, 2008 23:09 CST
Comment/Review:
kelly, YOU KILLED HIM!! DON'T TALK TO ME I'M IN MOURNING!! *sniffle* ♠ well you got around one of my objections against reading the alternative pairing. it is very touching and profound and i'm going to follow it =/ i guess. it also showcases your demented sense of humor which is peppered here and there. now if you can write one that has both of us satisfied as far as the pairing is concerned but how do you write two possessive youkai with similar backgrounds and make them share? *wiggles eyebrows* SLAP ME!! ♣ glad you're back! ♥ captivated ♥ ginny *skitters off to find one where the puppy is ALIVE and happy!*
 Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 04, 2008 20:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I love you, Madmiko-chan. What you don't do to me. Don't get me wrong, I love all your work--I've never met a Madmiko piece I didn't like--but this one was just so...real. True to the characters involved. I foresee this one remaining on my "special" list for a long, long time. Thanks for posting, as always. Cheers!
 Reviewed By: Vert  On: November 04, 2008 19:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Kawaii
 Title: SQUEAL!!!
Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 04, 2008 12:14 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, as if you could get any less than tens across the board from me! This is wonderful and fuzzy and heart warming even though you brilliantly gave us angst and corrupt reikai power play and sadism. *melts into the floor* I love you! I jut wish we could have seen the way her 'allies' trounced Koenma in a diplomatic battle! I'd pay for tickets to see that! XD and maybe somehow a shot at Yenma's reaction to just who her allies were would be funny. I can see it now: "Yenma sunk slightly in his throne, his brow furrowed and glistening with sweat. 'Well fuck it all.'" ////And that's really all we'd need! Kudos for another HieiKag story that is so essentially you while being so essentially them! Ahaha. I love who they keep on telling each other stories!
 Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 04, 2008 02:15 CST
Comment/Review:
that was perfect keep up the good work
 Reviewed By: Kurai Mori [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 03, 2008 22:35 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was a beautiful piece of work! I loved the premise you used to have them meet and the way you twisted the ending of Inuyasha around. It made for one very interesting story, one that I couldn't stop reading once I started! It was unique how you had Hiei and Kagome come closer together through the telling of stories. And also how Hiei managed to grow to respect her and figure out part of her secret about the Shikon. Though it does leave me so curious about exactly what happened to it. Which is alright, since it seems to almost be a moot point with what the fic is truly focused on. And that was a beautiful take on the prompt.
 Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 03, 2008 22:24 CST
Comment/Review:
you come up with these quick. i like this one. poor kagome always the girl n trouble and need rescuing. i like the way you ended this with hiei telling her their story. and her saying that it was a start of a love story. a perfect story. looking forward to you next chapter in black widow miko too.

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