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| "The Forgiving Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 22:34 CST
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This was a really, really nice piece. ^_^ I loved the originality of it. I have no idea how Kagome managed to stick around so long when he was being such a horrible little so-and-so, and I laughed when he stopped killing her "so often." It was very sad, though, that he lost it like that and disappointed himself as well as her because he was obsessed with her secret. I was surprised she was scared, though. I know she thought they had moved on in their relationship, but she knew she would come back. And he actually was so ashamed that he ran of into the Makai when he had vowed they would never catch him and make him go there. He was definitely disappointed in himself. I liked the way they met up again in her time and her forgiveness of him was so sweet. My romantically-inclined heart naturally took that as a step toward them renewing their acquaintance and hopefully moving closer now that Hiei is older and more in control of himself. Very interesting story!!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 17:32 CST
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this was great, i voted for you.
| Reviewed By: Bloodcherry [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 13:47 CST
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This is amazing! *grins* I was surprised by the way you made Hiei at the begining, very realistic and In Character... and I loved the WHY of how Kagome is timeless... most people would just have Midoriko make her immortal for something or another. XD I'm so proud! *sniff sniff* --> Ja ne, Bloodcherry
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really was fantastic and very imaginative. I loved it. It was definitely something I could see Hiei doing. You captured Kagome's heart perfectly. What other person, real or fictional, could go through that without going insane and/or becoming vicious and bitter. ----------------------------------------------------------- Everyone reading the story should know you won second place in the contest, and definitely well deserved. I am thrilled and honored to have had a tiny part in inspiring you to write it.
| Title: Sugoi!!
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I mean, wow!!! ^.^ I love originality, and it doesn't get more original than this!! I bow down to your awesome plot! I loved the immortal Kagome- Hiei killing her again and again was soooo Hiei !! This was just a fantastic piece of work, I loved it to bits! Kudos to you, Alesyira-san!!! ^.^
| Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 12:35 CST
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:D This was one of my two faves during voting. Thanks for sharing another great piece! :)
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