| "Precious" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mia On: January 30, 2003 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! Lady Une and Duo? Who'd have thought that? Besides, Duo is adorable. |
Reviewed By: Cranapple On: February 11, 2003 17:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm not even going to comment on the TOTALLY shocking element of chapter 5. You know what I mean! Just want to say it was really interesting and cool. |
Reviewed By: April Kristina On: February 11, 2003 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I need to lay down now...Relena and Dorothy?! That is so funny. Oh, my God I laughed when they made out infront of Duo. Totally bizarre. =D |
Reviewed By: Jessica On: February 07, 2003 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nose bleeds? Definitely doesn't sound good. From what you've said, it'll be nothing but drama to come. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: March 16, 2003 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, we know who was at the door. Flashback was nice showing the two guys being playful with kids. |
Reviewed By: April Kristina On: February 07, 2003 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny screen names and the animated screen saver sounded cute. Duo doesn't sound to good, though. Guess you'll be writing him with some kind of illness? Well, as long as it all works out in the end. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: February 07, 2003 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kind of thinking Duo maybe ill and is in need of a cure. Maybe that's why he's so frisky with Une. Living life to the fullest. |
Reviewed By: Stewart On: February 21, 2003 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(shakes finger at author) What a place to leave off! So, so cruel. Nice stuff this chapter. Plus I didn't read any grammer errors. So good job.
bobeto@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like reading this story for the Une/Duo elements. The ir relationship is so strange but it definitely works in the stories favor. I guess Heero will be the first person to know Duo's secret if he tells him. He better! =D |
Reviewed By: mei_akutenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 16:32 CST
Comment/Review:
yay! another update! Heero giving kids piggy pack rides, now that's different...Heero's gonna find out, isn't he? School really is evil, especially math. *grumbles* I hated algebra 1 too, but I hate geometry more. |
Reviewed By: Nanashi-chick [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 19:03 CST
Comment/Review:
First off you have got a great story going. Second your paragraph structuring is off.
I like story immensely. I can really see Duo and Une together. |
Reviewed By: Jessica On: February 07, 2003 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nose bleeds? Definitely doesn't sound good. From what you've said, it'll be nothing but drama to come. |
Reviewed By: Mason On: March 05, 2003 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, keep missing updates! Stupid, boring, high paying job! You know my reviews good. You haven't disappointed yet. |
Reviewed By: Anria Lalumin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got a pretty good beginning here. My only real complaint would be the lack of prose around speech, even if it's only something as simple as '"..." Une said.' It just makes it easier to read.
Anyway, I have to say I'm intrigued at the idea of a Duo/Une romance. Maybe it's just me in my weirdness, but I can see this working. . . . Keep it up! I definitely want to see more of this fic!
Anria. |
Reviewed By: April Kristina On: April 11, 2003 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best fics I've read! So all I can say is...What the hell? Duo, no baka! |
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