"Precious" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: ALL CAPS On: January 30, 2003 23:22 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LADY UNE? DUO? HEY, THAT'S AN IDEA I KIND OF LIKE. INFACT, I'M ACTUALLY EAGER TO READ MORE. BESIDES, UNE IS A BABE. I CAN SEE HER WITH ANYONE OF THE PILOTS, EXCEPT WUFEI AND QUATRE. QUATRE AND UNE? *SHUDDERS* AND SHE'D END UP SHOOTING WUFEI. =D |
Reviewed By: my parents are jerks! On: January 30, 2003 20:53 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: My prayers have been answered! I'm a huge fan of Une and I adore alternative pairings of couples. Canons cool, but sometimes different ideas are just more interesting. |
Reviewed By: Jessica On: January 30, 2003 19:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Duo as a stepdaddy to Marimeia? What a scary thought. |
Reviewed By: Mia On: January 30, 2003 19:32 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this! Lady Une and Duo? Who'd have thought that? Besides, Duo is adorable. |
Reviewed By: Cranapple On: February 11, 2003 17:06 CST Comment/Review: I'm not even going to comment on the TOTALLY shocking element of chapter 5. You know what I mean! Just want to say it was really interesting and cool. |
Reviewed By: April Kristina On: February 11, 2003 16:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I need to lay down now...Relena and Dorothy?! That is so funny. Oh, my God I laughed when they made out infront of Duo. Totally bizarre. =D |
Reviewed By: Jessica On: February 07, 2003 16:06 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Nose bleeds? Definitely doesn't sound good. From what you've said, it'll be nothing but drama to come. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: March 16, 2003 16:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well, we know who was at the door. Flashback was nice showing the two guys being playful with kids. |
Reviewed By: April Kristina On: February 07, 2003 16:04 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Funny screen names and the animated screen saver sounded cute. Duo doesn't sound to good, though. Guess you'll be writing him with some kind of illness? Well, as long as it all works out in the end. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: February 07, 2003 16:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Kind of thinking Duo maybe ill and is in need of a cure. Maybe that's why he's so frisky with Une. Living life to the fullest. |
Reviewed By: Stewart On: February 21, 2003 21:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: (shakes finger at author) What a place to leave off! So, so cruel. Nice stuff this chapter. Plus I didn't read any grammer errors. So good job.
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Reviewed By: Kuno-baby [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 16:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Like reading this story for the Une/Duo elements. The ir relationship is so strange but it definitely works in the stories favor. I guess Heero will be the first person to know Duo's secret if he tells him. He better! =D |
Reviewed By: mei_akutenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 16:32 CST Comment/Review: yay! another update! Heero giving kids piggy pack rides, now that's different...Heero's gonna find out, isn't he? School really is evil, especially math. *grumbles* I hated algebra 1 too, but I hate geometry more. |
Reviewed By: Nanashi-chick [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 19:03 CST Comment/Review: First off you have got a great story going. Second your paragraph structuring is off.
I like story immensely. I can really see Duo and Une together. |
Reviewed By: Jessica On: February 07, 2003 16:00 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Nose bleeds? Definitely doesn't sound good. From what you've said, it'll be nothing but drama to come. |
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