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Reviewed By: Mason On: March 05, 2003 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, keep missing updates! Stupid, boring, high paying job! You know my reviews good. You haven't disappointed yet. |
Reviewed By: Anria Lalumin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got a pretty good beginning here. My only real complaint would be the lack of prose around speech, even if it's only something as simple as '"..." Une said.' It just makes it easier to read.
Anyway, I have to say I'm intrigued at the idea of a Duo/Une romance. Maybe it's just me in my weirdness, but I can see this working. . . . Keep it up! I definitely want to see more of this fic!
Anria. |
Reviewed By: April Kristina On: April 11, 2003 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best fics I've read! So all I can say is...What the hell? Duo, no baka! |
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