| "Precious" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: LEnny LEMonte' On: February 06, 2003 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What difficulties are you going to lay on these two? I can see a number of problems (easily solveable) Une and Duo can have. Happy ending, anyone? |
Reviewed By: my parents are jerks! On: February 05, 2003 08:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Excellant kissing scene. These two just can't seem to keep away from one another. |
Reviewed By: Mia On: February 05, 2003 08:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Getting hot in here! Duo and Une making out? My eyes just fell out of my head. =D |
Reviewed By: April Kristina On: February 04, 2003 20:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I've always wondered what Lady Une would be like on a date...hmm? They are going to date,right? |
Reviewed By: Mason On: February 04, 2003 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The romance is good and so is the humor. Wasn't really checking for sentence structure or spelling errors, since I'm not a big stickler like some millitant grammer detectors. As long as you're not a blatant misspeller and your sentences make sense, I don't think it detracts from the overall plot. Really like this premise and hope you have fun with this. |
Reviewed By: Stewart On: February 04, 2003 15:42 CST
Comment/Review:
It's a nice beginning. I just trying to imagine the problems they'll have to go through. Is she over Treize? |
Reviewed By: Sano On: February 04, 2003 12:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kind of short chapter, but it's all good. Duo's not what I'd call shy. He's kissed her, I think, in each chapter. Wonder how their work environment will be like? |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: February 04, 2003 10:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, we know what happened with Hilde. Duo's a kissing bandit, isn't he? Love that. |
Reviewed By: Cranapple On: February 02, 2003 16:04 CST
Comment/Review:
If Duo and Une are gonna get together, I hope she gives him a hard time first. That'll be funny. |
Reviewed By: Craig Christopher On: February 01, 2003 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, why didn't I ever think of that pairing before? It could work. Can't wait for your next update. |
Reviewed By: Big Gay Al On: February 01, 2003 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Adorable! *hugs Duo plushie* I can Duo definitely being the chaser in this relationship. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: February 01, 2003 09:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Where's Hilde? Not that I care? Just curious. I think opposites do attract and Duo and Une are real opposite. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: April Kristina On: February 01, 2003 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very excellant start. Someone as cool and collected as Une with wild Duo is priceless. All I can say is I dig this story and need more chapters!! |
Reviewed By: Sano On: January 31, 2003 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best chapter yet! I can really see Une and Duo getting it on and being a couple. Kind of sweet. Awww. |
Reviewed By: Stewart On: January 31, 2003 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Except for some small errors, this was dynamite. I like the idea of Duo chasing someone as strong as Une. Duo's definitely one of my favorite characters of the series. |
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