| "A Dragon’s Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Meztli-JC17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 19:57 CST
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It seems you discontinued this story. Makes me sad. One another note I love all your stories I've actually payed a visist to all of them. I like the way you use your words and all. I really hope you continue this one though and all the others (adds you to favorite auther list) :3
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Reviewed By: *river On: September 24, 2009 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this story!! Interesting, the dragon gaining the Shikon's power! Grammar correction: (end of chapter 2) "Your right," Hiei smirked. "Why should it matter to me whether the soul has been reincarnated or your spell is breaking due to a flaw?" should be "you're right," (contraction of you are
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: June 04, 2009 05:04 CDT
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Oh wow, nice going so far!
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Reviewed By: Lily_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am thoroughly enjoying this so far. I must admit, the idea that Kagome losing everything and offering the Shikon to the dragon for its assistance in sleeping away the centuries is quite intriuging. ... I have to admit that if the reincarnation of Kagome's "dear companion" turns out to be Hiei, I will laugh my frikin' ass off! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: laWaya_aDisi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE THIS FIC!!! I can't wait until the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lily_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit, this is a rather original plotline. The way the crystal keeps breaking apart like that, is it because of Hiei summoning the dragon. Because that would be rather interesting if that were the case. Anyways, I hope that you continue this story, I'd like to see Hiei's reaction if and when he discovers the truth about what power the Dragon really has.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 23:59 CST
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Good start. I'd like to see more. The shikon would definitely explain the power of "the dragon of the darkness flame" which is unique as far as I can remember. I also liked the dragon having a fit on Hiei's arm and almost getting out of his control until he realized Hiei would be unknowingly bringing it right to where Kagome is located. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lidia On: February 05, 2009 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good for a first chapter. I'm curious about what's going to happen now.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 05:49 CST
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this sounds good so far
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 21:07 CST
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okay you got me.. i am curious... hiei fighting to control the dragon while in a meeting? i have a feeling the dragon knows kagome.... upate soon.. i would like to know some more...
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