| "Everything Burns" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2010 23:59 CDT
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Will there be more of this anytime soon since it's been over a year since the last update & I've just reread the same 4 chapters for the 3rd to 5th time?
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2009 04:22 CDT
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fantastical, love the pairing... love the crossover... i love your story is pretty much what im getting at here... its great seriously, you need to hurry and update... i like how you are doing the future vs. past for hiei. most just have the memorys occur as they happen for kagome, and thats great and all. i mean, it still makes for a good story, its just that i like the whole time paradox thing... what do i do, i can change the past, but will it change the future and all that jazz... very good... im gonna favorite you as soon as ive submitted my review... and then im going to bed... oh gee, it would be great if there was an update waiting for me when i check my mail tomorrow... *hint hint*
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: May 13, 2009 22:46 CDT
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Oh man yes, the time travel conflict really only happens when you manage to live through the time and poor Hiei has done just that here. That's quite a predicament there
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 12:49 CDT
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I added this to my favs. can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: April 21, 2009 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!! I look forward to more updates.^^ So update soon because your writing and plot are great. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow!!! Talk about confusing time loops . . . But great! I loved it. I like your characterization and how you portray each character through the POV switch, and how clear you make them too is nice. Great job!
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: March 01, 2009 03:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon. I really like this fanfic. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 01:45 CST
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this sounds like it's going to be a great story, keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Mrs. Cake (NLI) On: February 28, 2009 00:10 CST
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PLEASE CONTINUE, I'm hooked, lined and sink(erd)?? Lol, I love it!!! :D -does a happy dance- OH, and, a cookie for you too. ^^ -hands you a cookie-
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: February 27, 2009 06:06 CST
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Oh god thats a terrible cliffhanger. Terribly misleading.. >
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Millicent On: February 25, 2009 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. You had to end it with a cliffhanger XD Please continue your story.
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Reviewed By: my3rdeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 09:49 CST
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i love it...up date soon.
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