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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 14:57 EDT
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Lovely chapter...cant wait to figure what the purpose of the road trip is...very interesting and I hope that we find out about kaguras past but all in due time...dont want the story to end too soon...but lovely once again and thanks for the past lemon I will savor the images for a while till the next one XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 06:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good explanation chapter!
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Reviewed By: vikay09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOHOOO! They took their time didn't they :D like i said before i'm really glad you waited, makes it even sweeter in my own opinion. Really good chapter! can't wait to read some more :D!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 00:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
100% lemon chapter almost...
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii* On: September 02, 2009 20:17 EDT
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OMG...I love it when you are in a good mood cause that was yumminess all over XD I wish I could draw cause I think everyone should visualize Sesshy sketching in boxers...hotness!!! but dun dun DUN DOUBT??!! Oh my goodness cant wait for the angst in the next chapter...keep it up XD
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 17:34 EDT
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PLEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE let there be a lemon...cause that was aamzing XD yum yum yum Cant wait for the next chapter and you say more twists...man I cant figure out what your going to do...XD thanks for the update and i cant wait for the next one
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 06:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovey Dovey time... or about as much as Sesshoumaru or Kagura would actually get...
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Reviewed By: vikay09 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 14:54 EDT
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ABOUT BLOODY TIME THEY GOT TOGETHER :D:D:D:D!! I adore this story,and you've made the characters charming! im glad you didn't just have them jump each others bones as soon as they looked at eachother! cant wait to read more :D!
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Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: August 19, 2009 23:59 EDT
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Wow nice twist at the end...I wonder how that is going to turn out...dun dun DUN Love the dialogue between the two as its so sweet and makes me want a sesshy for myself...sigh...XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 23:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. sounds like Sousuke wont be going home in one piece...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2009 06:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful... I think I read before I when to bed, and then reviewed the next day... If I remember correctly... protective puppy...
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 16:17 EDT
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hehe...it better be the sign she was waiting for...it was so Sesshy's style absolutely loved it and the magazine quiz was a nice touch in the chapter as well...awesome awesome...cant wait for next time so good luck writing XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2009 03:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic work!!! as again I am finding that you have updated VERY late at night and end up having to write the review after work...
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 02:22 EDT
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very interesting...I like your idea with her staring in it...will she get the part??? eeeeppp cant wait for the next chapter XD
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2009 11:50 EDT
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Loved the chapter...wanted to hit them both upsode the head for cutting around the bush and hiding their feelings...oh well all in good time I guess...and I like your idea for the other fic...I will definently look forward for the first release XD keep it up
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