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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
protective, and a bit that kinda how that statement might feel for her (stab in the heart thing)... lovely chapter... CAN'T wait for the reaction in the next one... VERY good drop off point!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bre'Auna Kemp On: June 19, 2009 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Hate him that bastard needs to stay out of Kagura's life or die by Sesshomaru's hands in a painful death. Kanna is his child. Now i'm angry guys like him are beneath respectful and independent women who try to better themselves for their children. Sesshomaru needs to show Shin the door and 'comfort' Kagura if ya know what i mean. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not coming with us??? STAB STAB STAB... how dare you!!!! or that's how it would go in my imagination... but I really think this is going to break Kagura's heart... Wonderful chapter... Thank god for Sesshoumaru
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the it's not good for the baby line was brilliant!!!! fantastic chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Be'Auna Kemp On: June 09, 2009 06:36 EDT
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this is so awsome. it feels like i have been put into a drama movie and everything is not going the way i thought but it gets better on its own accord. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 09:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic chapter. I loved this line "Long blood red nails" The dog demon answered without flinching. 'The kind of nails that can leave deep welts in a man's back.' The dog demon thought to himself, then horrified by his own line of lustful thoughts he mentally added 'Where did that come from?!' now bed time for me...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2009 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lols great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 05:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLS!!!!!!!!!!!!111 I don't think the word diaper should EVER come out of his mouth... I don't usually picture him EVER saying that word!!! FANTASTIC!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic chapter!!! Sesshy boy is using his AUTHORITY. lol... the commanding voice of Sesshoumaru get everything done!
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: April 28, 2009 08:49 EDT
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Once again I am loving where this fic is going!! I love how Sesshomaru denies the obvious and tries to put a rational spin on what he's feeling. He couldn't possibly like her NOOOOO, so it must be just that he needs ad ideas haha (nice touch)!! Your story is very creative and I can't wait to read more. Thanks for the chappie!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wormed is certainly the word! great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Bre'Auna Kemp On: April 22, 2009 13:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story i think i like it more than Indecent Proposal. but that is still left up to debate
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 09:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've hears food is the way to the man's soul.. lol and how he was eating being reviled in the last chapter...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 01:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sure if she cooks for him he will certainly hire her for his chef or some thing... sounds like he needs some one to looks after him...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 03:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
perhaps he could use a new Secretary... one that wont forget his USB...??? lol love the new chapters!!!
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