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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2009 03:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
two great chapters!!!! poor Sesshy... it looks like he wont get anywhere until near the end of the story...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2009 03:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
looks for my review comment... then goes what the??? its not there!!! I missed a chapter!!! school sucks!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2009 07:58 EDT
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man sesshoumaru is sooooo smooooooth...high five for that XD and I cant wait for the next chapter as your title intrigues me...thanks again and cant wait for next week XD
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Reviewed By: buggy6565 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 02:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reading this and two brothers and i must say your fanfics are really original! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 07:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I'll think I'll stand over there."... best line!!! great chapter...
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 22:50 EDT
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hahah...inuyasha is sure in for it...thats going to be on hell of an argument...thanks for updating XD you made my day XD
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Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: July 10, 2009 10:20 EDT
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HAHAHAhaha..oh man Miroku is in for it now...that was a perfect ending...yay for that...man love the update as usual and cant wait till next week XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2009 04:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well we all know who that last person is... lol FANTASTIC chapter!!! (and if I review before and after more points for you!!!)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2009 04:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 lol I was on The Shoebox Project (Harry potter fan-fiction) and they were doing that... you know you have really dedicated fans when they know when you are going to release updates (which didn't help me cause I am in(or live in) Australia and they were publishing during the middle of the night to me) going to read now...
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Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: July 07, 2009 12:16 EDT
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Oh boy I cant wait to here what Inuyasha and Miroku have to say about it...fun fun fun...lovely chapter once more and I cant wait for Sesshoumaru to make some moves..well I at least hope he does cause they have to get together...go sesshy!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2009 07:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea... well only in my imagination...!!! first review for new chapter!!
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Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: July 02, 2009 09:31 EDT
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wahhhh...so short...but oh so good...absolutely adorable and I cant wait for their morning encounter...geez i cant emphasize enough how adorable this AU is...perfect in all ways XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 07:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh well... no killing... yet... lolz. wonderful chapter...
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Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: June 29, 2009 06:48 EDT
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Wow now this is a good story and I am happy that I am finally reading it...love the whole concept and it flows really smoothly so no complaints at all XD cant wait for the next chapter...update soon XD
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Reviewed By: Bre'Auna Kemp On: June 26, 2009 21:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome,Yeah! one down one more to go. She got rid of one man now its time to put on the big guns and wrestle in bed all night long with the lovely delicious golden eyed hunk. You when they kiss let it get heated you have him to push her up against the wall pick her up and ravish her as he expertly guides them to his bedroom. Let him make her feel beautiful,strong and pampered. Bright White Lights and the world spinning around her vision. something like that
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