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Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: July 07, 2009 12:16 EDT
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Oh boy I cant wait to here what Inuyasha and Miroku have to say about it...fun fun fun...lovely chapter once more and I cant wait for Sesshoumaru to make some moves..well I at least hope he does cause they have to get together...go sesshy!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2009 07:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea... well only in my imagination...!!! first review for new chapter!!
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Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: July 02, 2009 09:31 EDT
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wahhhh...so short...but oh so good...absolutely adorable and I cant wait for their morning encounter...geez i cant emphasize enough how adorable this AU is...perfect in all ways XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 07:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh well... no killing... yet... lolz. wonderful chapter...
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Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: June 29, 2009 06:48 EDT
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Wow now this is a good story and I am happy that I am finally reading it...love the whole concept and it flows really smoothly so no complaints at all XD cant wait for the next chapter...update soon XD
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Reviewed By: Bre'Auna Kemp On: June 26, 2009 21:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome,Yeah! one down one more to go. She got rid of one man now its time to put on the big guns and wrestle in bed all night long with the lovely delicious golden eyed hunk. You when they kiss let it get heated you have him to push her up against the wall pick her up and ravish her as he expertly guides them to his bedroom. Let him make her feel beautiful,strong and pampered. Bright White Lights and the world spinning around her vision. something like that
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
protective, and a bit that kinda how that statement might feel for her (stab in the heart thing)... lovely chapter... CAN'T wait for the reaction in the next one... VERY good drop off point!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bre'Auna Kemp On: June 19, 2009 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Hate him that bastard needs to stay out of Kagura's life or die by Sesshomaru's hands in a painful death. Kanna is his child. Now i'm angry guys like him are beneath respectful and independent women who try to better themselves for their children. Sesshomaru needs to show Shin the door and 'comfort' Kagura if ya know what i mean. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not coming with us??? STAB STAB STAB... how dare you!!!! or that's how it would go in my imagination... but I really think this is going to break Kagura's heart... Wonderful chapter... Thank god for Sesshoumaru
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the it's not good for the baby line was brilliant!!!! fantastic chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Be'Auna Kemp On: June 09, 2009 06:36 EDT
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this is so awsome. it feels like i have been put into a drama movie and everything is not going the way i thought but it gets better on its own accord. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 09:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic chapter. I loved this line "Long blood red nails" The dog demon answered without flinching. 'The kind of nails that can leave deep welts in a man's back.' The dog demon thought to himself, then horrified by his own line of lustful thoughts he mentally added 'Where did that come from?!' now bed time for me...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2009 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lols great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 05:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLS!!!!!!!!!!!!111 I don't think the word diaper should EVER come out of his mouth... I don't usually picture him EVER saying that word!!! FANTASTIC!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic chapter!!! Sesshy boy is using his AUTHORITY. lol... the commanding voice of Sesshoumaru get everything done!
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