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Title: A powerfully written chapter.
Reviewed By: SaeriJenn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 21:05 PDT
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It may have taken you some time to release this, but it was definately worth the wait as the chapter, especially near the end with the Nameks' arrival on Red Station, was powerfully written. I love the depth of emotion that you gave to Dende in this chapter. He such an overlooked character in the series that it is nice to see someone writing him such a wonderful role. ^_^ While the cliffhanger had me pulling at my hair, I shall be patiently awaiting the next update. One other thing to maybe help with the whole writing process: go back over your story and make a small list of items/plots that need to be resolved--that may help you focus better on the process of writing while organizing your thoughts and help you see what needs to addressed still within the story.^w^ Definately looking forward to more of your beautiful work.
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 19:13 PDT
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Love, love, loved it! I wait with bated breath to read what happens next...God, your fic is so entertaining! Other than how sad I am for cute, little Dende, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and it's plot transition. I can't wait to see just how bad the proverbial 'shit' will hit the fan, haha. Thanks again, so much, for sharing!! ~Reux
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Reviewed By: please update! On: October 17, 2010 18:55 PDT
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ack! please don't wait as long to update! i have ants in my pants just waiting (wow, that was corny). But seriously, cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 15:57 PDT
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Oh suspense! I really liked how things were wrapped up for the moment to allow the plot to go forward. I love the character building and the couples but I like plot stuff too of course. What's going to happen to Guru? Will someone end up switching bodies with Guru? Keep it up! I can't wait to find out! :3
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Reviewed By: KB On: October 07, 2010 16:11 PDT
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...totally forgot my account pw by now. Oh well. This is o0Kittyblue0o and I'm just going to say I LOVE YOU FOR THE RADDITZ/PUAR YAOI and at the same time I went OMG Nuuuuuu when there wasn't a B/V lemon in the same chapter XD That would have made it over kill, I know, and I also know a lemon doesn't make a story--but they are still TOTALLY awesome to read(specially when entering a contest basing your work around the theme 'lust' and needing inspiration)
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2010 19:56 PDT
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I have to say that this is one of the best fics I've read in a long time- and yes, I'm one of those 'I just found it and couldn't stop' fans. ^_^ I love everything about it, even the Raditz/Puar action despite being a die-hard V/B enthusiast. I like the entire atmosphere of the universe you've built and the in-depth dynamics of each and every character. I also enjoy the style in which you write, flowing easily from dangerous espionage to passionate relationship and the fact that no one aspect is let be for too long. Simply put...I think this fic is EPIC and had definitely re-inspired me for my own fics. Thanks so very much for sharing it. ^_^ Reux- ravenator525@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: DeadRabbit92 On: September 20, 2010 21:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey so I Just found your story yesterday and I read the whole thing! I love Puar and Radditz- you're right they're my fav DBZ couple! I was wondering if 18 is gonna show up soon? oh and i'd like to recieve an alert for this story, my emails Bobettagd@aol.com. I just set the fanfic story to alert will this site update too?
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2010 18:57 PDT
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I def think you've made puar and raditz a new fav. couple of mine!!!! hehe Keep up the great chapters
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Title: addicted
Reviewed By: wkt On: September 19, 2010 09:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I am totally hooked on this fanfic! Well done! I find myself laughing out loud while reading. I can't wait till the next installment. Please keep them coming. You rock! \m/
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: September 17, 2010 18:39 PDT
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Brilliant! keep it up!!! i love this chapter! raddize finally found out!!!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2010 09:26 PDT
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I love how you have Vegeta unconsciously react to Bulma being away and coming close to him, so cute. And it's good that Bulma is finding some peace with their relationship. Hopefully you'll indulge us with another Bulma/Vegeta scene sometime in the near future ;) And poor Gohan, he just can't catch any breaks. Now I'm going to be completely honest: I didn't read anything above the Bulma/Vegeta part. So I know about what happened with them and I know what's happening with Gohan but I hope that there's nothing else other than "reconciling" going on with Radditz/Puar and nothing crucial to the plot XD I'm sure the that it was a wonderfully written as the rest of the story, I'm just really not into it (-_-;) All in all what I read was great and I can't wait 'til next time.
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2010 01:29 PDT
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Great chapter. I just love Radditz and Puar as a couple. So sexy. I'm also glad that Bulma is ok with Vegeta as a killer... at least for now. I'm sure you probably have plans to bring that back later. Poor Gohan. Can't sleep anywhere for all the lovemaking and nasty smells. haha I am looking forward to the next chapter. I'm eager to see where the plot will take us next! Also, I'm hoping that a certain baby will enter the picture eventually. I know Bulma has taken preventative measures but... lol That would jeopardize a lot though, I suppose. Either way, I still love this story and I look forward to all the updates to come! :)
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: September 08, 2010 00:47 PDT
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OMFG ! i so regret not reading this sooner! And i couldn't stop reading since I picked it up again from chapter 19. But this story is so unique and amazing! I love how Vegeta is slowly figuring out that their bonded. And now that ball is starting to get rolling with the gravity machines going. i cant wait to see them kick freezas ass. And whatever will happen to puar and raddiz!? I love the tension you put btw goku and chichi. and what you did with all the characters! KEEP IT UP!!
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2010 19:54 PDT
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I was waiting for Raditz to find out! Very nice reaction. I'm glad the romance between them isn't over. I really enjoy it. I loved this chapter. I'm expecting Gero to pop soon. haha! Great work! I love waiting for updates. The new chapters are always worthwhile. :)
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Reviewed By: Rjc On: August 30, 2010 14:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love this story I check everyday to see if you updated.
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