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Reviewed By: brutalbee On: July 31, 2010 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome awesome AWESOME! as always, thank you for an amazing update!! love where this is going :D
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Reviewed By: tspiteri1687 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2010 14:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I find this story very enjoyable, excited to read the next chapter to come out. I like the whole story line and suprise factors that have came out of it. Will continue to read this story to the very end.
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Title: ch 28
Reviewed By: venus legacy not logged On: July 23, 2010 12:34 PDT
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This chapter definitely gave me a lot to think about in terms of Vegeta's persona and the conflict between the idea of him as a villain and him as a hero. I think it was a good move having Bulma witness the villainous/evil side of him first hand and really be confronted with this aspect of his charater. This has been something that I have been struggling to reconcile myself with ever since the incident with Vegeta and the prostitute he killed, when he was trying to deny the bond between bulma and himself. I wonder how they can move on from this, if they can move on from this. I really like the way you portray Gohan in this story, he has a maturity beyond his years, yet despite what he has experienced, there is still that a trace of Gohan, which lingers, when Bulma said to him that Vegeta needs her and Gohan responded with "He really does, you know." That gives me hope that there is a way forward for Vegeta and Bulma, I just worry about the journey it will take to get there. Can Bulma love/be bonded to a murderer, without a conscience?
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Reviewed By: Sherkane On: July 23, 2010 12:00 PDT
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Vengeance is turning into one of my absolute favorite fanfics!! You did well with this darker chapter. It brings suspence and tension to your story. As Piccolo would say, there is just so much "goody goody" a good story can bear to remain credible. You are so talented. Keep on the good work! Your loyal fans are anxiously waiting for the continuation of the saga.
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 06:54 PDT
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I cant wait to see what happens next in the coming chapter. I mean whats going to happen between Vegeta and Bulma? Will she start to distance herself from Vegeta only to cause a rift between them? So many questions and so little answers. Thank you for this chapter and I hope you don't wait another month to update this story.
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2010 18:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no a rift! I can't wait to see how it works out.. though I'm obviously hoping Bulma will get over it and Vegeta will get over himself and just accept the bond!! :) I love this fic! Keep up the good work! Great job!! I look forward to another update!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2010 16:43 PDT
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Uh-oh, I think Vegeta's gonna regret saying accept it or get out 'cause there's no way that Bulma is going to easily accept it. It is a little hypocritical of her to have been okay with it until she saw it for herself but I understand where she's coming from, Frieza being a horrible beast that controlled Vegeta all his life one would consider that he had no choice but to kill as told. Can't wait to see how this will change things between them.
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Reviewed By: np On: July 08, 2010 15:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this story! its an awesome idea and its written great. the radditz/puar thing is really cute too lol. update soon please!
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Reviewed By: KB On: June 10, 2010 02:10 PDT
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its ME AGAIN just letting you know I'm still reading and its STILL AMAZING keep it up I want MOOOORRREE
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 19:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what else would make Goku feel a lot better and heal him a lot faster? SEX!!! Yup! Sex! Lots and lots of SEX!!! Think about it: his body will get the much needed workout, the stress will leave his body, his energy won't go to waste, and I'm more than positive that Chichi will reciprocate in kind! So yes! SEX is the only answer for Goku's ailment! Mmm...hmm...glad I thought of it. That's mainly because I'm highly anticipating on reading a Goku and Chichi lemon now. Not to say that I don't enjoy Bulma and Vegeta, but Goku and Chichi, I've always adored. And let's face it: VB gets tiring after a while. But finding well-written GCC fics is like finding a needle in a haystack. So I'm hoping that you'll write one soon for my favorite DBZ couple.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 17:30 PDT
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I love seeing Vegeta being so playful, he's definitely letting himself enjoy what's between them more. I wonder if Bulma will bring up what Radditz and her talked about, and if Radditz will ever be able to walk again after Vegeta's learn he told her about it. I also wonder what she'd think if she knew about what happened when Vegeta tried to forget her, you know, since it went so well ;). Lots of different things happening and it's looking like it's building up to something big. Totally didn't expect Zarbon being a traitor. Maybe I should go back and re-read the story again, not that I'll have to force myself ;p. Can't wait 'til next time.
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Title: ch 26
Reviewed By: venus legacy not logged On: June 09, 2010 14:15 PDT
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Again, I like how you pay particular attention to the conflicts within the characters. Zarbon's a perfect example of this as you show the connflict between his duty as a soldier to freiza and his personal loyalty/will to himself and his homeland. I worry that his failure to disguise his voice may have repercussions for him. There are eyes and ears everywhere in the empire
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Reviewed By: Bulmaveg Otaku On: May 17, 2010 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I've been reading your story, eagerly looking forward to updates, and I just realized that I couldn't remember leaving a review so far. Well, shame on me. As a fellow author I know what it's like wishing and hoping and waiting for those review to come rolling in. Anyway, the creativity and uniqueness of your story is a real delight! Keep up the good work!
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Title: ilex9
Reviewed By: ilex9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2010 07:23 PDT
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Still very good reading. I missed the last chapter and read the two together and they flowed nicely from one to the next. I was wondering when you were going to reveal Ginyu. By now it was pretty obvious who's body he'd snatched, but in the beginning it did take a little guessing, so good job with that.
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2010 03:29 PDT
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"the bastard who got himself and my son tossed in hell", hrrr!! As if Goku had made that on purpose. Moments like this I hate Chichi. Allright, she suffered a lot, but she hadn´t the right to treat him like this.
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