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| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] | | Pages (25): [ « ‹ 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 › » ] | Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2010 21:13 PDT
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poor goku & chichi. it looks like I was incorrect in my initial assumption about Dende! :o Can't wait til next chapter
| Reviewed By: shadow'sgirl On: April 28, 2010 19:15 PDT
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Great chapter!! i knew it was Nail!! im glad its not tien! ps. MORE LEMONS PLEASE!!! lol
| Title: A must read
Reviewed By: Dimitrova On: April 28, 2010 02:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely gorgeous fanfic with an intricate plot, a lot of characters with interesting issues, irony, suspense and very nice love stories. The pace and the writing are really good and with a lot of background details. It's also very realistic and in character... I knew that this return to Red Station would be eventfull, I'm not deceived at all. Nice Bulma/Vegeta moments, we've got the mole and Goku is so cute with his drawing !!
| Reviewed By: venuslegacy not logged On: April 27, 2010 23:16 PDT
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wow, you really snuck that one by me, now I wonder if Guru and dende know, if so what is there strategy, keep the enemy close? I thought that was really sweet what Goku did for Chi chi, the gift he left under her door, I hope Chi Chi appreciates it, i can understand there is a lot that needs to be resolved between them, it also seems as if Gohan has unresolved issues with how his father is towards Chi Chi. You even gave us a lovely treat with the vegeta nad bulma interaction. It's interesting that Bulma and Vegeta seem like the "normal" couple now and Goku and Chi Chi are the angsty ones ( I wonder how long that will last? lol). I also felt for 16, and I wonder how he feels, if he even understands what he is feeling, I still remember what he said to krillin in the previous chapter when asked if he was ok, he said something like one of his parts was broken and he was trying to fix it, maybe that was a telling revelation about his psyche?
| Reviewed By: sdfsd On: April 27, 2010 18:02 PDT
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woah! didn't suspect nail, you distracted me with tien! well done
| Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2010 16:39 PDT
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I'd say 'poor Goku and Chichi' if I wasn't too thrilled by more B/V stuff. Great chapter, it was good that they didn't fight each other off too much and hey, Vegeta finally got what he dreamed of for so long ;) Vegeta's still trying to fight off the truth about mating it seems but at least he's going with it a little bit. And Dun Dun DUNNNNNNN, The mole has been revealed finally, though I did kind of suspect it when he questioned Bulma they way he did. Great chapter, can't wait 'til next time.
| Reviewed By: shadow'sgirl On: April 12, 2010 18:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! i have read all 24 chapters in 2 days!! ..and yes i do have a life lol i should be writing my paper for english class but i just had to keep finding out what happened next!! Im dying to know who the leak is...i have 2 guesses...Nail / Tien....we'll see if im right! Anyway, keep up the awesome work and dont stop the story till its finished!!
| Reviewed By: cyberbat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2010 12:21 PDT
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Ah, the cliff hanger! Well done on the dramatic and the very Goku humor ending. I can't wait to read the rest and see how the drama is going to play out.
| Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2010 18:58 PDT
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Oh boy, Goku is going to have to do some serious grovelling, isn't he? I'd say I hope he's learned his lesson, but this IS Goku we're talking about. I love your Mrs. Briefs, so matter of fact. "Do you have lots of condoms?" Hahaha, choice! And Nappa's night time sounds and smells... haha! Poor Piccolo! But we didn't see much B/V interaction. (whine) Hopefully we'll see more than Bulma's lusty thoughts next chapter. :) Somehow I doubt he will care about her less than perfect appearance. Maybe Vegeta would find a female grease monkey attractive the way a guy who cooks and irons is attractive to some women.
| Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 23:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO how could you end it there!!! AAAAAH! Must have more! More more more more!! The suspense is KILLING me!
| Reviewed By: venus legacy not logged On: March 31, 2010 21:10 PDT
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wow, you never dissappoint, this chapter more than surpassed expectations, there was so much happening, and yet you remained true to each character, giving them the nuance and the detail necessary for me to empathise with them, I liked the insight into Zarbon's situation, you have definitely made him a more multifaceted character with depth, I see the struggles within him, and I feel I can understand where he is coming from and the choices he made. Oh my gosh, the reunion scene was potently electrifying, you got the tension, the emotions, everything was written very well, poor sixteen. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 20:29 PDT
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Wow, that was awkward indeed but I understand why it had to be done. Hopefully they'll work it out eventually. And I loved Krillin picking up on Vegeta's glare when Bulma asked if he wanted her to come along. Not too much interaction between Bulma and Vegeta but a lot happened so that's to be expected. I'd love to know what Vegeta thought when he first saw her. No doubt when she was hugging Goku he was feeling something there. Can't wait 'til next time.
| Title: Update!
Reviewed By: Jo On: March 28, 2010 10:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update =D
| Reviewed By: yunglucyboo On: March 25, 2010 16:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story keeps getting better. Lol Not that it wasn't already. I love how Vegeta is accepting his feelings, and how he's acting on it. The part where he was like telling bulma indirectly he likes her, even if it was sexual from the beginning. Although she didn't let him finish, I'm thinking he might told her feelings. Lol Other then that this story is awesome! So keep up the great work of thoughts!!!
| Title: Chapters 21 - 23
Reviewed By: not a member On: March 23, 2010 08:58 PDT
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Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile! Great last three chapters, Nail's interaction with Bulma was interesting if not a little hostile to say the least, but sheds a little more light on those mysterious Nameks. Also, Goku and Piccolo's escape attempt was pretty intense, unfortunate that it didn't work but I am so excited now that the Saiyans are going back to Red Station! Chi Chi is going to have a coronary when she sees Goku, I'm really excited to see that interaction. Also really thrilled to see more of my favorites, Bulma and Vegeta. He's just got it so bad for that girl, doesn't he? It'll be fun to see where this goes. Keep it up! Thanks!
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