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Title: wow
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2009 11:55 PDT
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This story is incredible, I am at a loss for words. And this chapter was simply beautiful, I finished reading it and just sat back and my mind was like wow. The way you have delved in to the universe with such creative ingenuity; the attention to detail that you give to the characterisations, their backgrounds, and the setting is remarkable. I eagerly anticipate your next update; I'm sad when I come to the end of the chapter as I know that is my cue to leave your universe.
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Reviewed By: cyberbat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 13:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great beginning, great descriptions, and great character development. Everything you write keeps me glued to the seat waiting to see how it will all turn out, and I can never figure out just how you are going to take it, which I love. Can't wait for the rest!
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Reviewed By: xaverri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 03:23 PDT
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Nearly crying, that was so dark and serious, so different from the humor you display but so, so fitting :) Longer review on the forum where I found you :D Keep it up! -X-
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Reviewed By: yunglucyboo On: October 12, 2009 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Round two!! Awww this chapter was very sad and enlightening. I liked how you incorporated in the story, why the vegeta kills the victims of purge missions assigned by frieza. He explained that death is better for the "weak". And that they will be perfect prey of freiza men delight in hurting others. That really got me thinking wow, vegeta is very deep and he does have feelings for others even if its in a sick and disburbing way. Thank u again, and i look for the next chapter. P.S please have bulma and vegeta kiss, even if its by accident. LOL I Love the way you describe them. okay i know that was random ;)!!!
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Title: Amazing!!
Reviewed By: yunglucyboo On: October 12, 2009 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry if i happent reviewed this fabolous story when you posted it originally. Ive been reading this story from my phone. I couldnt complete the review because at the end, it ask for users to type in a security code. Omg let me stop and just tell You how much i loved this chapter. To even make it fair Im going write one for ch 14 too. Now thats off my chest i can continue my original pursuit. Thank you for writing this wonderful story, I love every bit of it. The chemisty with bulma and vegeta is just perfect. I love the part when bulma tells vegeta that she would rather be spanked, then punish his crew, for payback. I could feel the electricity in the air, when he said "Maybe later". That did it for me, I was laughging, I could feel for bulma. Pure comedy at its best. I love your story. Thank You!!!
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Reviewed By: gamergirllive [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2009 19:32 PDT
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D'awwww...! So sad!!! D= It almost makes me not upset that you've denied me Bulma/Vegeta encounters this chapter! XD As always... Great chapter! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: gamergirllive [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2009 23:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waugh! I must read more! I'm really excited to see who the spy is, and what will continue to happen with Bulma and Vegeta. ^^ Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: October 04, 2009 05:03 PDT
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Silver lady crazy has a good point, actually I can't wait to see the interaction between Vegeta and Mrs. Briefs, I always LOVE those parts in any fic, and the cartoons! You're really leaving us hanging yet again, I want mooore, mooooooore! Can't wait for Puar/Radditz, you've kept us waiting for 2 chapters now, I demand they meet! :P :P Just kidding of course, it's your story and either way you write it down is perfectly fine by me because you sure seem to know what you're doing :) God the sexual tension between Veggie and Bulma is too much, just him standing behind her and touching her arms like that...*shivers*. Hope you write more soon! Loved this chapter anyway :D -X- Xaverri
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2009 02:57 PDT
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I agree totally with Guru, about that Vegeta´s sick inside. These mind-games are really unnerving. At least he took the first shot. It´l be really difficult to cure him, indeed. It was really touching the exchange between Chichi and Gohan... that reminds me of those children who suffered abuses and avoid people out of shame even though it´s not their fault _ like Sohrab, from The Kite Runner. I bet it was Mrs. Briefs who gave those clothes to Vegeta. :)
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Reviewed By: not a member On: October 03, 2009 21:27 PDT
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Wonderful chapter. Glad to see the interactions between Bulma and Vegeta, they are highly entertaining and have great promise. I am glad to see that ChiChi and Gohan are having a talk -- I am really excited for the next chapter's jump back in time. Also -- interested in any potential interaction between Puar and Radditz. Great work, keep it up! Thanks
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 10:46 PDT
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I love them. Their interactions are just so priceless. The thing about the spanking was so funny. It's good to see that Vegeta was as enamored by 'Blue's' voice as Bulma was with 'Vengeance's'. They were both being pulled to each other before they even knew it. Great update, I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 13:50 PDT
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Uh ohhhhhhhhhh..... Poor Bulma... depending on what /kinds/ of things Vegeta wants to do! Gah! Update soon :D
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 06:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, Bulma just did not like seeing Vegeta in pain. Moreover, she already lost her threesome fantasy so you cannot punish her guys. And, poor Goku and Piccolo have only been checked on once throughout the story, but you know I am actually fine with that. Hope Vegeta is not already leaving Red Station because of Frieza. Wonderful chapter!!
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Reviewed By: not a member On: September 20, 2009 17:23 PDT
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You are an amazing writer. The character development in this story is so extensive, and there is much evidence of that in this chapter. Gohan has developed more as a character than I thought he would, and I am eager to see any developments between Radditz and Puar in the near future. That could get messy... lol. I am honestly shocked at the treatment of Chichi by Gohan -- I really wonder why he is so distant from her and doesn't defend her and such. I am also looking forward to Bulma and Vegeta becoming closer in later chapters and Vegeta's interactions and thoughts about Bulma. He is still very mysterious, especially it seems now that his identity as Vengeance is revealed. Great work, keep it up! Thanks!
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Title: Loves it!!!
Reviewed By: yunglucyboo On: September 20, 2009 16:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowers is all i can say! lol i just lied to myself, i think im gonna continue to rant how wonderful this story is!!! Great chapter, it was fun to read. Thats the one thing i like about ur fics, they dont seem cheesy or easy to figure out. Other than that I like that v/b met again lol. Vegeta is such a complex person, i just cant figure him out. But that's what i like about him, and u hit on a nail every time with ur descriptions. Great chapter and I look forward to the next one u write.
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