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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2009 18:51 PST
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I should hope that you have enough confidence in your work that you don't feel compelled to add a Radditz/Puar scene. It's not necessary and I think it would cheapen your work if you feel it is necessary. If you really, truly feel you have to do it, please consider posting it as a separate story so those of us who don't wish to read that type of material don't have to. Otherwise, I would like to continue reading your story as I think so far it is quite different than anything else I have read and intriguing. No offense, but the Radditz/Puar thing is getting tiresome and I really feel that you could have just as good of a story without feeling the need to keep going back to something that not everyone enjoys reading. Please don't take this as a flame, but the honest opinion you asked for.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2009 18:03 PST
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Awesome chapter. I definitely wouldn't mind some Puar/Radditz lemon.
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Title: Love IT!
Reviewed By: hellspawn9245 On: November 04, 2009 00:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best fic I've read in a long long time please keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2009 10:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story since yesterday and now I'm up to chapter 14. I haven't read it yet due to your author's notes. But I'm anticipating it. I LOVE this story!!! When I saw your penname on the DBZ/GT list I thought to myself "That person sounds familiar", so I chanced this story sole based on that thought. I'm glad I did. I'm hooked on this fiction and I'm loving it! Radditz and Puar? Hilarious shit! Especially chapter 8 when Puar posed as a tree! I choked on my own laughter at that. The 16 and Chichi scenes kinda weirded me out, but I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Goku will make his return soon. And of course Bulma and Vegeta...those two...can us fans ever get enough of them? NOPE! I'll be looking forward to your next update!
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Reviewed By: gamergirllive [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 15:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waugh! I must have more!! XD As always, keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next chapter... Don't wait so long this time! =P ^^
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 00:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg the sexual tension is so thick I swear I can feel it sitting here at my computer. Can't wait to see what happens when Radditz figures out Puar kitty is Puar Sex God XD. And I'm VERY interested to see how Bulma and Vegeta are finally gonna get together. This story is so delicious XD
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2009 20:00 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Haha! I can't wait to see any confrontation between Puar and Raditz! I loooove how you made Nappa so observant xD Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Deep Joy!
Reviewed By: Kit Kat Monster On: November 01, 2009 17:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If only I could describe better the squeek of joy I let out every time I realise you have added another chapter! This story is amazing, the development of each character feels true to its original- although in the series we may have never seen some of them in such situations, this is definately how they would have responded had they been put in them- and yet you have given them a tint of your own. I love it. Your use of detail is great and not only helps me feel as though I'm there, but helps pace the story too. Please Please update soon, I'd say this has to be one of the best B/V fan fictions I've ever had the pleasure to read. :D
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Title: ch15
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2009 16:51 PST
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I can't get enough of your Bulma and Vegeta interactions. It s kind of like watching a mating ritual, they were both showing off infront of each other, (more so Vegeta in this chapter) especially when Vegeta noticed the look of dissappointment on Bulma's face when he said he didn't understand the finer details of the machine, and he gets defensive saying '"I have not had much time with them. I am certain that I would understand, given more time to study the diagrams and notes." And then later when he boasted about his wealth, it was like his little peacock moment. I'm so jealous of Bulma. I liked Nappa's very insightful observation of his saiyan 'sons' and the way he is sort of like a father figure towards them, and I am really looking forward to that 'bird and bees' conversation, man I would pay good money to see that lol. I also was very intrigued by your section with Zarbon, I am looking forward to seeing more of him. I like that in this story the line between good and evil are not so cleanly demarcated, the characters are so much more rounded because of that. Even the way you give depth to Ginyu, the fact that he is still trying to survive, it is all about self preservation in Freezas empire. I am really looking forward to seeing Goku again as well, especially when the others meet him again, I love the way you have written him and it will be interesting to see their reactions
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Reviewed By: not a member On: November 01, 2009 15:23 PST
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This chapter was so packed with details! Loved it, your style of writing is great even when you're not writing something incredibly dramatic or sad. Can't wait for some more interaction between Bulma and Vegeta, their scenes are my favorite ones. Really great work, keep it up, can't wait for your next update. Thanks!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: yunglucyboo On: November 01, 2009 09:32 PST
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this story is so incredible i had to write another review. omg the details come to life when i read them. I feel the emotions of how the character feel. this probably the best story i like of b/v. you are amazin with ur talent. wonderful job, continue this great piece of art.
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Title: Oh my...
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Lord... so I am basically an ass for being away so long because look what I have missed! I've just read chapters 13 & 14 and was blown away. First of all, I am thrilled that Blue & Vengeance have finally met. I've never read a story with these two characters in this type of capacity before and I'm so excited to see that dynamic between them as you create it. =) Secondly, the chapter of Gohan's memory was VERY well done. I absolutely love back story and this one really gave us a great glimpse into how the Saiyans lived their lives under Frieza. This is an avenue I've always wanted to explore but never delved into it enough. VERY awesome indeed, well done! I'm curious as to whether or not Gohan is relating this to his Mum or not. How will she react?? I seriously can not wait for the next chapter! I'm going to have to break from seriousness for just a moment and say that this was my favorite line: "You beastly little prick!" Can I use that? ;D
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Reviewed By: Bulma the babe2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 04:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! sorry for the valley girl comment but OMG! This story is too amazing for words! As a long time B/V fan who has a liking for the darker AU stories, I was going through withdrawals for a while here...I hadn't seen very much good quality stories for a while now...just as I was thinkin' that the fandom might be taking a hiatus I find this story. My only gripe is that the suspense is KILLING me. I love this story! Its dark, its original, its full of twists and turns and it has some humor and sex thrown in there...what more can I ask for? And hey, If you ever need someone to bounce ideas off of or a beta or anything I'd be more than happy to help. Sorry about the shameless plug there but this story is AMAZING!!! Please update soon!!
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Title: Impressed
Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 21:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too amazing for words. Its so refreshing to see such good work. I've been so disappointed in a lot of my reading lately, just seems like all the good authors have crawled into a hole and disappeared. The storyline is unique, it is detailed and didn't just jump straight into the sex. I hate stories that do that because it just seems like the story dies after the first big sex scene. The sexual tension however is perfect. The flashbacks really help you understand. You've captured a perfect Prince Vegeta. I love your concept of Nappa and Radditz. I gotta say, Puar and Radditz has to be the strangest combination I've ever seen but it oddly works. Puar doesn't get enough time in the lime light :). Chi-Chi and 16, gotta say I find that adorable. Fighting Chi-Chi > Bitchy House Wife Chi-Chi any day. Love the badass girls. Women are strong whether physically or mentally and deserve some credit. I thoroughly look forward to your next update. I look forward to Blue and Vengeance's next encounter :D.
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Reviewed By: not a member On: October 20, 2009 10:09 PDT
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Saw your note at the end of the chapter; I understand that this must have been difficult to write, but you made great work of it. I absolutely loved your writing style in this chapter; the emotions felt by Gohan were very real, and everything flowed very nicely. This is probably one of my favorite chapters in regards to how it is written and the character development involved. Gohan has a new facet to his personality in my eyes now. I can't wait for your next update. Keep up the great work. Thanks.
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