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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2009 20:05 PST
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Haha, I thought the fart was funny... just like a typical guy, all right. And for all of us who wanted a little more BV interaction, I daresay you sorta went even farther than anticipated. Whoo... (Question, though - why did Bulma bother with the condom?!? Wasn't the damage already done?) And poor Bulma, losing the only thing she had left of Yamcha. The fact that anything happened between Bulma and Vegeta at all given what happened to Yamcha should have spoken volumes to Vegeta. Bad of him to leave like that.
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Reviewed By: not a member On: November 27, 2009 22:21 PST
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Wow, great chapter. The ki-sensing part was very well done, and I really liked the way you wrote the scene in the kitchen with Chichi and Krillin. And, FINALLY! Great sex scene between Bulma and Vegeta, I couldn't have expected anything else from you -- masterfully written, and very hot. Their interactions and streams of consciousness throughout the entire thing were perfect. Also, Vegeta's reaction to the photo give much more depth to his feelings for Bulma (if only she would realize!). I can't believe you had them leave though -- way to add to the suspense! I hope that the suspicions Vegeta had about Tien that he voiced to Bulma don't fall to the wayside...unless he killed him or something, which is unlikely.. Great chapter, wonderfully written. Keep up the great work, can't wait for your next installment. :D
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Reviewed By: J. On: November 27, 2009 11:35 PST
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Why did they have to leave?:( That's just so mean!! Okay, I kinda understand, but still.. Please, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: msissyburrows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2009 10:12 PST
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Hot! Aww did they have to leave? We were jus starting to have fun1 I wish you had shown them playing hide and seek that is a fun game no matter what the age! lol! Did Raditz find Puar?
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Reviewed By: B On: November 26, 2009 16:31 PST
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Great chapter! I love that they finally got together, can't wait to read more. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: msissyburrows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2009 22:01 PST
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Nice story you got there I am really enjoying it! That Last bit with V-kun and B-chan was cute he was all flustered! The nerve! Bulma is brazen! She might wear a dress but she deffinetly wears the pants! Please update soon!
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Title: OMG YOU'RE KILLIN ME
Reviewed By: Geta-Baby [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2009 22:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I can't really say my title is true...I just started reading this fic today I'd sadly I'm just left waiting for your next update, def will favorite this for notifications. Anyway, for your question at the end....Idky but I love the freakin Radditz and Puar thing; it's just so strange but then good that I have to love it. Hoping you decide to do a lemon for it just to see; but seriously if Bulma and Vegeta don't have some contact soon I think I'm gonna scream. Lol I never left a review like this so I guess in short what I'm saying is....I love your fic and cant wait til an update.
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2009 01:02 PST
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I only wish that Mrs. Briefs and Chichi weren´t so nosy... sometimes they truly irritate me. Poor Krillin, and I think that the Saiyans are being actually gentle to him (or he wouldn´t be able even to stand now) Hmm, if everybody´s suspecting of Tien, it´s more than probable that HE IS NOT the mole.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2009 19:23 PST
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Yay another chapter. I love Vegeta's reaction to Bulma's teasing. He likes to think that he's all powerful and extremely intelligent but in the end he has no defense against her. Love it! It's good that they're not just jumping each other so soon after meeting each other for real but it's deliciously painful reading the tension between them. Apparently it's pretty obvious if Nappa noticed. As for your question about Puar/Raddtiz, I'm personally not a fan but it's your story, do what you want. If people don't like a certain part they'll just skip over it. (I do really read the majority of the story to know the plot but I'm really just here for the B/V action XD) Can't wait to see where you take it from here.
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2009 22:31 PST
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Yay mild confrontation with V/B. Bulma likes playing with fire huh? Trying to seduce a Sayain just sounds like suicide to me XD
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2009 00:57 PST
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I'd be all for a Puar/Raditz lemon (as long as Puar isn't in his tiny little cat form haha)!! All-in-all another amazing chapter =D I hope Chichi ends up bonding a little more with Gohan (although, its understandable why it wouldn't happen). Also, I have a few guesses as to who the spy is!!! Although, I'm sure when/if we find out it'll be someone I don't expect ;) Can't wait til the next awesome installment!
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Reviewed By: KyaJaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 18:39 PST
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Glad to have you back!! Every time I reread this I fall in love with the story all over again! I'd definitely go for some Radditz/Puar action! They deserve it! ~_^
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 18:21 PST
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Ohhh I'm glad to see you back! Such a great story! I love the interaction between Bulma and Vegeta! So great! Oh, hun, I would cheer on the Radditz and Puar lemon. What are you waiting for? ;)
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Reviewed By: gamergirllive [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 12:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah ha ha ha ha! Yay! I love the interactions between Vegeta and Bulma. ^^ But I agree with nutnatz! It is time for something to happen! =D I can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: nutnatz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 01:43 PST
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Ack! the anticipation is ridiculous. I've just waiting for -something- to happen. Them to discover Tien isn't Tien, Radditz to figure out about Puar ( don't need to have that scene btw, the way you did it before was quite fine). Them to find out about Goku and Piccolo being alive. Cause seriously, I felt so bad for Chi Chi when she was disappointed about Sixteen and her sex less life for so many years. Finally, Bulma knows she want him and Vegeta knows he wants her. OMG STOP TEASING!!!
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