| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 07:44 PDT
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Interesting! I wonder what's causing him to react like that to medicine. I also wonder what Vegeta's plans for keeping her with him are. Such a cliffhanger you've left us with. I can't wait 'til you update. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: September 20, 2009 04:37 PDT
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"If Vengeance and Vegeta were the same person, there went her favourite threesome fantasy." My favorite sentence of this chapter :D I was on holiday when you posted the previous one, so I'll review both at once! First off I LOVE TFS, and it's great to see you support them and even able to fit in a tribute :D I recognised it immediatly! I love your humor, but I think I already mentioned that! It's now a certain that Tien is Ginyu, and with Gohan's revelations to everyone present, I don't think it would've mattered for Vegeta to stay conscious in the tank. I have guessed that Vegeta needed to stay focussed in order to surpress his powerlevel? Which is obviously a good reason not to keep him sedated! Tien/Ginyu is gonna tell on them anyway, so I hope he gets cought soon :S Either way, it's a massive cliffhanger once again, and you manage to do that so brilliantly every time! I also hope, like a previous reviewer that ChiChi and Gohan atleast get to talk, but I also understand why he's avoiding her at all costs. We've yet to see Puar and Radditz meet, but I think it's great we got to see inside his mind, even when he was under the shower *blush*. I wonder if he has a special trick to rinse all that hair of shampoo :D Gohan is gonna be surprised to see Puar, and it's gonna go downhills for our kitty from there :P There is just so much for you to write, you have (succesfully I may add) weaved several seperate stories together, which will probably make this a tale of epic proportions, not focussing on one thing (Bulma/Veg), but trying to make everything as complex as possible to keep us guessing all the time :) I do miss a bit more of Goku/Piccolo, but I am sure you have your reasons for that and I am eager to see it play out. Further more I am pleased to see hardly any errors in this chapter, you've certainly improved on that one as well making this whole story lift to another level! For now I just have to see how it plays out (please update soon again :D) but if you continue in this fashion this may prove to be the best AU story I've ever read! Especially how you manage to involve all the original DBZ characters without making it any awkward, or unnecessary. Everyone is just as important :) I think I've said about everything I can say, hope to see you again (next week?) with another chapter :) Goodluck!
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 02:37 PDT
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Radditz could end up with all the shampoo in the ship, hehe! But I must confess I´m a little angry, now... thanks to Vegeta, now everyone is without the tank, and Gero certainly won´t give them one of his. Nice job, Vegeta! I bet he demanded for Bulma to stay in order to... touch his skin and soften her a bit. Just hope he´ll give her a new tank afterwards, but I don´t believe much. Hope Gohan and Chichi might fix things up... that made me a little sad. If Radditz wasn´t so sticky...
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Reviewed By: gamergirllive [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2009 16:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hooray!!!! I hope you update again soon! I'm anxious to see what happens next! I'll bet Ginyu spilled the beans!
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: September 19, 2009 15:07 PDT
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lovein it!!! keep it going!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 05:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Vegeta is at Red Station with Bulma! Poor Bulma her fantasy dreams of Vengeance are ruined. Wonderful chapter! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 03:36 PDT
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Wow, finally things are coming to set up. It´l indeed be hard both for Chichi and Gohan to deal with what he has become. I only wish that Nappa´ll be able to keep his hands off the women while Vegeta´s in the tank - I don´t trust him.
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: not a member On: September 07, 2009 22:37 PDT
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Omg! This chapter was so good, I am dying for the next one. And Tien -- if he is Ginyu, then Bulma and Vegeta are up a creek. I loved the interactions in this chapter, between all of the characters in every scene, notably the one at the end. I am so thrilled to see where you take this next, keep it up! Thanks.
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Title: TFS..."no!"
Reviewed By: dragonNebula On: September 07, 2009 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Hey Vegeta?" "What is it Nappa?" "Are we there yet?" "no" "Hey Vegeta?" "What?" "Are we there yet?" "No" "Hey Vegeta?" "WHAT!" "Are we there yet?" "NO!" "Hey Vegeta?" "WHAT!!!""Are we there yet?" "AAAUHHHG!" TFS rules! lol! I so love this story! You do great writing! But where has Piccolo and Goku been? Still in those cages? SHAME! ;p Anyways, please don't rush and destroy a good thing but please post another chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: September 07, 2009 20:17 PDT
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LOVE this chapter, and the last one. Please update soon!!! I just cant wait to see what happens. i love the characters that u've created. only you can make a story this good with them!
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Reviewed By: gamergirllive [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 18:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waugh!!!! How could you leave it off THERE?! >_<
I know you just updated this... but... UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 15:47 PDT
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You're killing me, softly!!!!!!!!!! God, you make me want to hate you SO MUCH! Yet I can't!!!! Moar chapters =D I demandz it, with a cherry ontop!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 14:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God that was such a fan-freaking-tastic chapter! The ending was just amazing! I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 16:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Vegeta is going to Red Station! Yay! Update soon! Poor Sixteen having no manhood.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! Chichi moving on to Sixteen. I hate to think about anyone leaking information but I wonder if it might be Tien. Love the interactions between Vegeta and Bulma!
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