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Title: We miss you
Reviewed By: FishTVCo On: July 20, 2012 23:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sniff* *sniff* Where is the next update? *Puppy face* Pleeeeaassssse post soon. I really really like this story! |
Title: Nothing Personal
Reviewed By: kwietasan On: June 17, 2012 21:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off i start by saying, i am very sorry for whatever troubles you are facing and thank you for taking time out to give us all a piece of your imagination. When i first started this story, you blew me away with the originality and your signature style of writing that mixes humor,romance and angst into one interesting read. However i must say that the last few chapters you have written have been painful to get through. Your last update was very unsatisfying, I understand the need for character development which many authors fail to do in fanfiction, but you are focusing on developing minor characters rather than developing the actual story. 3/4 of your recent update focused on the "relationship" of a cat and a jealous saiyan. The scene was easily predictable and very amateur for an author of your caliber. Then the remainder of the chapter you decided to fill with frieza's character if all people. to top that off i dont understand how bulma and vegeta went from just meeting to boning and now bulma thinks of tarble as her brother in law?? you have not shown how their relationship has gotten to such a point because you are to busy focusing on minor characters. This story has went from being an epic to a soap opera in less than 10 chapters. unless you get back to the origins of this story i think you will begin to loose the interest of many. Please remember your audience is not just a bunch of teenagers looking for pwp. You have grown people who do actually enjoy a good plot, following your updates. |
Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2012 22:11 PDT
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Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! And to meet Tarble! Keep it up! :) |
Reviewed By: SniperSnake [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2012 08:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story by pure chance and out of all the V/B stories I've read (prbly a 1000+) this is by far the best. I read this story straight thru and I'm overjoyed that you updated. In regards to your personal life, I hope that the worst is over. Keep your head up Ms Kitty and I'll look forward to seeing more innovation from you as you bring this wonderful brainchild to a conclusion. |
Reviewed By: Nan de mo offline On: June 04, 2012 09:01 PDT
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I have been trying to leave a review for days but spotty Internet on the road do I just wanna say fabulous chapter, and love puar |
Reviewed By: fazkataz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2012 11:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
Welcome back! You made my day! Hoping you are okay. :-) |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2012 15:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea, u updated! They finally made it to Tarble's planet, and Bulma already considers him her brother in law. I guess they are considered married already. Thanks for the update. It was well worth the wait. |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2012 09:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry about whatever it is that you are going through; I wish you the best. That being said, I was so happy to see an update from you! Poor Radditz getting all jealous. I probably shouldn't find it as adorable as I do, but it cannot be helped. I'm glad to see Tien come out of his shell a bit more. I was worried he might have a breakdown or something. Anyway, thank you for updating even through all the trials life throws your way. As long as you continue writing, I will continue reading. Good chapter as always. Hope to see an update from you again in the future Take care! |
Title: COME BACK TO US!
Reviewed By: Rogues_masquerade On: May 07, 2012 18:27 PDT
Comment/Review:
we miss you and all of the DBZ gang, please dont forget us Dorthy! |
Title: Update!
Reviewed By: Jo On: April 22, 2012 07:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASEEE UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: lurker On: April 16, 2012 07:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u are definitely a talented writer.u have great v/b interactions here, i love it.with the other pairings well not so because i was never a fan of chi2x/kakarot pairing or puar/raditz or krillin/18 so sometimes i skimmed.pls update soon! |
Title: Desperate
Reviewed By: star65432 On: April 14, 2012 01:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome story! Please another chapter! |
Reviewed By: MarsBarss On: January 23, 2012 13:06 PST
Comment/Review:
The story has been dragging for many chapters now. I began this fic with so much enthusiasm and now im skimming through each chapter wanting to get this reading over with. Youve involved too many characters, too much side story, too little overall plot. I feel that everything that has happened in the last 20 chapters could have been summed up in 2. I'm sick of the relationship issues, I couldn't care less about some orly character, zarbon shouldve died long ago, puar... My god, so tired of his character. Never cared about him, but I tolerated him because at first it was humorous. It's annoying now. And as much as I live vegeta, my favorite character, you've done such a fabulous job fan servising his ego that I'd love nothing more than for goku to transform and wipe freezas ass. Just get the plot going, kill off some characters, stop bringing in new ones. W are at chapter 40. After vegeta and bulma find out each others ID. the face ginyuu, guru dies, find goku/picolo, everyones relationship dreams come true, zarbon betrays freeza to join the good guys, and now they'll visit tarble... Mink who? Who are these bitches, I'm already tired of them, kill em off already. -marsbar |
Title: Why?!
Reviewed By: Nesshii On: January 16, 2012 04:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why must this be a good story?! Why must I be hooked?! lol....This is horribly good. It's extra long, so it definitely gives me something to do, the story line is thick with details so it's very entertaining, and the B/V action has me hooked on wanting more and more every chapter. Damn it...this review sounds to perverse....lol But that is my humor. All in all, please update as soon as you can...this is a hell of a good story and it's very well written! (^^) Don't torture us please! Thanks! |
Reviewed By: Tattedvegetagal On: January 15, 2012 16:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, i'm so addicted to your story i get so excited when you post a new chapter, this totally cheers me up from all the chem lab work i have to do |
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