| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] |
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Reviewed By: loraven On: January 10, 2012 21:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
after three solid days of reading, i have finaly finished catching up. THAT WAS AWSOME!! please have pitty on a poor soul and update regualy. thank you for sharing your genius with me. |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko((offline)) On: January 10, 2012 12:56 PST
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...... :) tehe loved the opening scene hahaha had my good laugh of the day. although I must say I am having some raditz withdraws. :) And I really really hope Goku is gonna be ok :( |
Title: TFS Reference
Reviewed By: Nesshii On: January 09, 2012 22:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lolololol....I sooo caught it. "Are we there yet?" freaking hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing for a while because the image just popped into my head. Awesome story all in all! I'm still reading it cuz I'm totally hooked! Thanks! |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2012 22:08 PST
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It sucks that you lost the original version of this but I think it still came out really well. I'm interested to see what kind of toll this 'permanent damage' will take on Goku, if that's really what it is. I'm glad to see a bit of Bulma and Vegeta again this chapter. I think it's cute that he gets jealous now and then. It shows he cares in his veggie little way. I can't wait to see how their relationship evolves in the future but I have a feeling that may be a while off. Thank you for getting this chapter out in spite of all the troubles you had with it. As always, I loved it and I can't wait for the next! :) Until next time! |
Title: amazing
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2012 21:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the chapter, it was beautifully written. I like how you describe the struggles each character goes through, and how each individual handles their problems. You are amazing when it comes to writing b/v's relationship. It's so obvious that they're in love. Even tho bulma's the only one admitting it verbally, you can tell vegeta's head over heels for her. Man, I want to read more. Hope u update again soon. Oh, and Happy New Year:) |
Reviewed By: nonameoo On: December 29, 2011 10:09 PST
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I'm enjoying your story a lot. Good plot and really excellent grammar. The only issue I have is Bulma. I'm used to her as a smart spunky woman. Here she's just a bimbo who thinks about nothing else but Veggiecock. Poor Raditzu with a cat is actually funny. This gave a whole new meaning to beastiality lol But since its AU anything goes. |
Title: A bit worried.
Reviewed By: Saej On: December 20, 2011 20:23 PST
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I hope that you are fairing well. ^_^ Haven't heard from you for quite a while now. |
Title: all smothered in awesome sauce
Reviewed By: hplovecat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2011 09:53 PST
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I just need you to know that I cannot die peacefully until I've read this to the end. Easily one of my favorite BV's. |
Title: amazing!
Reviewed By: Girness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2011 15:34 PST
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I really love this story! I have been reading fanfiction for years and never really had a taste for M/M, but I really like your approch and style to the subject. Now I might check out some M/M romances! I will make sure I leave some reviews on ff.net just because this story is so awesome. Also, have you ever read Glad Day by Lisalu? It is on a BV site and the story is absolutely amazing, and it might give you some ideas for this story if you are looking for a muse. Here is the link (http://www.adimra.100megs6.com/lisalu/agladday.html) ___________________ This story has been posted so long ago and way before mediaminer came onto the web. I hope that you read it, and I am postive that you will like it. I am enjoying the puar/raddiz bit. I would have never imagined a pair like that, but your style of righting made me see the plausibility for this pairing for this story. I was wondering, will Trunks come into play before or after the frieza battle? Will dende create the dragonballs? With the dragonballs, there are so many possibilities because Vegeta could wish his planet and people home, earth could be restored, and namek could be restored. I really like how you tied up loose ends like the creation of Cell, and the third regeneration tank. I was wondering if Vegeta might teach Bulma hoe to fight just to defend herself. It seems in the story that Vegeta is secretly worried for her safety since they are going straight to Frieza to wage war. It would be a cute chapter to have Vegeta showing Bulma some moves, or possibly Dende unleashing some power from her or something. I can't wait until the next chapter! -girness girness@gmail.com |
Reviewed By: ilex9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2011 16:57 PST
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Nice to see that you are still keeping this going. I enjoyed Dende coming into his own and love the interaction between Kuririn and Eighteen. Always a pleasure to read. |
Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2011 11:29 PDT
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I had to laugh as one character after another came up frustrated or unhappy with what's going on. Even Jeice had something to complain about. I'm glad Dende is doing better though, out of everyone, and of course Mrs. B has never had a bad day--maybe a couple of bad minutes sometimes. I'm trying to let Burter/Z grow on me some more...trying! Glad to know Z's hair is better now, so he will maybe stop moping. Good luck with school! I won't be vocal about requests for updates, but you can consider it a given that I will be faithfully waiting. Thank you! |
Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2011 12:23 PDT
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I like how you're developing Dende's character. And I see what you're doing with Zarbon and Burter!! lol. Poor Zarbon, all alone. But they won't top Puar and Radditz; their cuteness level is through the effing roof. XD Eighteen's development is coming along well; can't wait to see more of Seventeen! I hope you've figured out what you're gonna do with the androids! Dude, I totally understand about school taking up so much time. I'm going through the same thing. I just have one complaint about this chapter: no B/V action. :[ Hope to see them next chapter. But I was still entertained, and I still enjoyed it! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2011 19:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can totally picture Zarbon with "The Rachel" haircut. Lol! Loved the heart to heart Zarbon and Mrs briefs had. Anyway, no b/v (which makes me kinda sad), but the chapter was still entertaining as usual. I hope u update soon. |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2011 18:08 PDT
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It's me as always. haha Once again a lovely chapter. I like that Dende is taking more authority now. Seems like he will be ok after all. I'm curious where the Burter and Zarbon connection will go but they can't possibly be as cute as Puar and Radditz. I just don't think it is possible. I got this flashback to Frenchy's Beauty School Dropout song when Mrs. Briefs said she went to beauty school. It must have turned out really well thought because I know exactly the picture of Jeniffer Aniston that you are talking about. I think. Oh and I love the Krillin and 18 awkward cuteness. I love seeing them get together. Anyway, I can't wait until the next chapter! Take care! Until next time! :) |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko((offline)) On: November 02, 2011 14:16 PDT
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:D I love that Zarbon is getting more and more.... hmm... awesome.... not a whole lot of my favorite grumpy prince. :) I have not had a good dream about him in ages either.... I need some inspiration :P |
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