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| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] | | Pages (25): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: A fan... On: October 30, 2011 02:16 PDT
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Beautiful update here. Makes sparkly eyes and hopes for a new chapter before Thanksgiving. But totally no pressure. | Reviewed By: saej On: October 21, 2011 16:04 PDT
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You're doing wonderfully so far, but some advice, hon--your plot action is starting to lag just a bit too much. I realize there is a lot to get through here, but some action is needed to beef up the plot a bit so you don't lag too much. | Reviewed By: not a member On: October 04, 2011 17:48 PDT
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Sorry that I haven't reviewed your story in about a year and a half, I haven't been on here for some time... but I love what you've done. It's drawn me in once more, and it's been a very long time. It would be a lot for me to describe every minute reaction I've had to your plot for the 20 chapters I read before writing this, but I must say the character development is as spot on as ever, and I'm really enjoying all the interactions that Dende has at Red Station. Also, the androids are both entertaining and endearing for as lethal as they are -- I love it. I'm looking forward to keeping up with you from now on. I could easily continue to read this story for another 5 years though if you need to take your time ^_^ | Title: Caught up *sob*
Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2011 05:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess you can tell how much I love this story and the way you're telling it. The last 3 or 4 chapters really ratcheted up the tension, and I'm a nail biter. The whole time everyone was off Red Station was very stressful! Vegeta really should have put his foot down and kept the Saiyans on board. Of course, I guess they were technically on board when they showed themselves to the hookers. I'm glad Zarbon is safe, and I admit I'm a huge fan. Whenever he gets attention, I'm thrilled, and his relationship with Vegeta is especially fun. I love Radditz's asides to him as well, and Puar's jealousy. Fun! Favorite recent line: "He really hadn't intended to begin his future of freedom by crawling into bed with the man in charge before following him across the universe; he'd done that once, and it hadn't exactly ended well." Lines like this just make me go, damn girl! You nailed it! Love the insight.Love that you gave it to Zarbon. I guess now the only thing I can do is start back at the beginning until the next update. It's really a great read, definitely in the top three of my favorite DBZ fanfics EVAH, and I say top three because I'm really indecisive and couldn't pick an absolute favorite. But I love this, and I think I'll love it more the more I read it. I love finding things I missed the first time. I'm crossing my fingers that you're still really into it to, and the RL doesn't ever get in the way. No pressure! Thanks again. | Title: After Chapter 39
Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2011 21:45 PDT
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'm slowing down to savor now, because I've almost caught up with you. Depressing thought! But I knew it was coming. I hope Gohan and Dende become closer. Good for them both, I think. I hope they don't have to jettison any bad nameks! More Zarbon is just what the doctor ordered. Thank you, and keep up the good work on that front. I'm finding that I'm missing Goku now. Funny how I didn't give him a thought, almost all those chapters before he got rescued, and now he's always on my mind. Please write faster and stay ahead of me!! Oh alright, just keep writing, please and thank you! | Title: After Chapter 38
Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2011 21:42 PDT
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Yes, Zarbon rescue! Take care of the blue guy! And I have never before felt a single thing for Burter in all my life. It was a void, total indifference. It feels funky now! Still not sure about a hook-up there--they're too reptilian maybe? I could probably be won over, though... I think... I did appreciate the Yamcha closure of the previous chapter as well. But I was sad that he suffered so much for the cause. Wasn't strong enough, had to die. Shame. Is Goku still in the tank? *confused* I probably didn't read carefully because I'm anxious to find out what happens. Thank you again! | Title: After Chapter 36
Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2011 18:45 PDT
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This was such an wonderful chapter. I especially loved Zarbon and Burter, because it gives me hope of things to come! Z must be rescued. And then hook up, not necessarily with Burter, of course... I loved the direction of the Goku character arc. As much as I adore Vegeta and his flawless character in this fic (not counting mass murder or random acts of violence), I've always identified with him as tormented. He is that here too, yes, but it's not as apparent. And it breaks my heart to see Goku tormented. And weak. Thank you for making that believable, and also for going out on a limb with that one. You really give so much, with your attention to detail and to all of the characters and their drives. You're an ace at dialogue too, and that's just so fantastic. I'll try to review more, but I just get so caught up, you know? Thank you!! Have fun writing more!! | Title: After Chapter 31
Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2011 22:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel like I have to apologize for only being moved to review after some hot Radditz yaoi. But damn. That was hot. I wasn't sure how I would feel about it, because I just wasn't. But damn. Phew. DAMN. I found this story three days ago, feeling in the mood for some epic A/U. I wasn't expecting the hot Radditz sex. Like Christmas in July. Hot! As I've been reading, though, I kept telling myself, I gotta stop and review. She deserves reviews! So I was intending all along to review--it was just the whole yaoi thing pushed me over the edge. I had to review. I'm finding it hard now to go back and tell you about everything I've enjoyed SO much up to this point. Characterization is a huge success. Thank God the only one I have to complain about is Frieza. He feels a little flat, so I'm kind of lukewarm toward him, when I like to feel passionately hateful toward him. EVERYONE ELSE, even Zarbon, I can't wait to hear what they have to say next. And sometimes they say and do the most outrageous things! I admire your daring in letting them be so essentially themselves, and act and think from those places. It really works for me that you don't seem to pull any punches. I don't feel like you're jerking me around--it feels like I'm just immersed, full on. Very little to take me out of the story. The pacing feels right; the plot, I'm not as enamoured of, simply because I'm scared. I like big ol' happy endings for everyone, and I'm just nervous. Really, though, I'm just a wimp. The plot's great, and I'm on the edge of my seat. Make everything come out all right! This is such a winner, in so many wonderful ways. I hope you're still enjoying as much as I am. I hope more people find it and enjoy it too. Thanks so much for sharing your huge talent with us! Pray continue. | Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2011 09:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you are back! My inbox was getting lonely. haha Another great chapter, well worth the wait. Where do I start? I love the building of 18's character and Krillin's relationship with her. It's so very cute. I look forward to seeing more of that! 17 seems very "metro"? Is that the right word for him? I'm not sure, but it's interesting. I want to know what's up with Dende. Are the other Namekians angry with him for healing Zarbon or not healing Guru? Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter! Once again, glad you're back! | Reviewed By: 17Fan On: September 18, 2011 08:08 PDT
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I really hope that 17 gets a bit more lime-light in the later chapters! I really love his character (which is why I write about him a lot) and I believe he has a bit more to his personality than most people write (dead, boring). Maybe he can find some guy on the ship attractive? (I've always seen him as liking dudes, and not girls...I mean c'mon look at his style of dress and mannerisms) LOL) | Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2011 22:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the sweet K/18 moments and seeing things through 17 and 18's perspectives. I hope all is well with you. Update if u can soon. | Reviewed By: ****** On: September 01, 2011 15:02 PDT
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Startin' to worry 'bout ya. Hope you're doin' okay out there. | Reviewed By: Jo On: August 22, 2011 10:19 PDT
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I visite and revisted, but stil no new chapter:( Update please! I really want to know what happens. Keep up the good work, love the fic! | Title: Congratulations on 800!
Reviewed By: Lady_BlkDia07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2011 09:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall I would give this fic an 11, but I miss puar and raditz! That is a hot couple!Congrats on your success of 800 reviews! | Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko((offline)) On: July 19, 2011 06:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor ORLY.... lolz to Puar.... Zarbons sleeping arrangement SUCKS! mmmmmmmmmmm Veggie (rofl just realized thats what my fam calls a camel toe) ...... and dear God Dende is growing up! I heart him soo much. Hope the whole crew makes it to Tarble's without too much drama... who am I kidding, bring on the DRAMA!!!!!! | | Pages (25): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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