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| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] | | Pages (25): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2011 23:54 PDT
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It's me again, as always. haha Great chapter... I have a feeling that bit with Orly and the girls is not over. The remaining two are certainly going to be a little pissed off. Nice to see the moment between Radditz and Puar. I love them so much. I know I keep saying that but it's true. Nappa and Mrs. Briefs... so hilarious. They would be awesome together. haha Poor Dr. Briefs. I liked the scene with B&V it was nice very sweet.. for Vegeta anyway. I keep wondering if anything will ever come of that mating thing that was mentioned all those chapters ago but I guess since he is with her right now there is no need to go insane or anything. It'll be interesting to see how the Zarbon situation plays out. I'm looking forward to it. That you for another wonderful chapter! Can't wait to read next time! :D | Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2011 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I know you weren't completely happy with this chapter, I thought u did a wonderful job conveying what u needed to in this chapter. There was a little of everything, from action to a little glimpse of everyday life on Red. It seems that they have formed a little family on the station ,and like the rest of us, a little dysfunctional to boot. Btw, r u forshadowing that maybe Trunks might be in the picture soon? I hope so;) | Title: A question from a re-read
Reviewed By: SaeriJenn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2011 19:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished a complete re-read of the story, and I must say again: how unique of a concept this is, and how I really like how you're able to wrap humor and drama and violence together in such an entertaining package. Oh! And kodos to the whole Raditz/Puar vibe you've had in this story [as strange as this may be, I'm actually starting to become a fan of this pairing]. After this re-read, I'm wondering if you're "dropping" the other character like Tien, the Nameks, #16, and #17 (heck even Goku and ChiChi somewhat) into a background corner in favor of trying to narrow down the plot to focus mostly on Vegeta, Bulma, Puar, Raditz, Krillin, #18, Gohan, and Nappa. My concern here is feel the story is getting because of it. Don't get me wrong, it's too fantastic for words as it is. But it feels as though there are lots of unanswered questions that have brought up in the plot that have either been glossed over to get to a new point or have maybe been forgotten about. The whole Tienshinhan thing for instance. What happened to him during his time in a slaver camp; how did he adapt coming back to the others; what about exploring those frustrations he expresses to Krillin in one chapter; or what about missions that he went on or could possibly go on? >.< Gosh I must should like a complete Tien fan here (Krillin and Uub fan though to be honest), but those questions could be applied to the other characters that have been "swept" into that corner. Maybe it's a preference thing, but in any case, you're doing a great job as is so, please, by no means change that formula because it does work wonderfully. Guess I'm just rambling on a bit. Definately, looking forward to the next chapter to come out though no rush. ^_^ | Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((OFFLINE)) On: June 27, 2011 11:44 PDT
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sorry it took so long to review. :P work has been bonkers. :) but I am glad Zarbon gets to join Red Station and I feel bad for the Nameks now :( also hoping having another man around wont hurt Puar or Raditz cause they are deff my 2nd fave pair :P | Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2011 04:56 PDT
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Once again you bring forth a marvelous chapter and make my day! :) Love the scene with Nappa and Dr. Briefs though poor Nappa will be disappointed when Trunks has all the coloring of his mother. haha He'd probably still go ga-ga over him. I still love Puar and Radditz. I had never thought of them as a couple before the fic but now I have a hard time not picturing them together. They are such a cute and comedic pair. Missing the B&V but I did like Zarbon's commentary on Vegeta and Bulma's actions. I can't wait until the next chapter. I'm always super happy to see an update in my email. Keep up the good work! Until next time! :3 | Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2011 18:25 PDT
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I loved the different point of views you have in this chapter. Kind of cool to read what the other characters think. | Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: May 31, 2011 16:13 PDT
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yay! more delicious men for red station! sorry for not reviewing sooner as i was out of the country :) I missed you! hsha | Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2011 02:16 PDT
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Love the story so far. I'm not into animal sex or MM (BTW Puar was female) so I just skip those. But the B/V part and the adventure is great. I really feel sorry for Zarbon and hope you wont kill him off. Ginyu is funny. All in all a very well written story. Except for the cat/saiyan thing lol | Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2011 07:28 PDT
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Omg, I died laughing at this part: "Radditz really wished he’d managed a different disguise. The hood he was wearing trapped all of his hair against his neck, and it was starting to itch. His tail was coiled tightly around his waist, hidden beneath the long hem of his sweater; he’d had to promise to keep it there so that Vegeta would let him out. Oh well, at least he hadn’t been made to shove it down one pant-leg." LOL, shove his tail down one pant leg hahahaha, I'm still laughing. Omg lmao again: Luckily for her, she could count on the fact that Krillin would probably die a thousand horrible deaths before allowing Eighteen out of his sight; the little guy had it bad. A thousand horrible deaths, LOL. Lol this chapter was hilarious, so many more lines I would quote but you know you're an awesome writer :P Update soon! | Title: lexylou
Reviewed By: lexylou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2011 03:14 PDT
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I really love your fan fics, but i'd have to say 'Vengence' is my favorite. Keep up the good work. | Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2011 20:21 PDT
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Wow, I'm real excited for the next chapter! Sorry I haven't reviewed recently. I have no excuse. :x Awesome as usual! Update soon! | Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2011 02:34 PDT
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It's me again! Another lovely chapter, as expected. It was good to see a little B and V. It's been a while for them. I'm excited to meet Tarble, though I guess Veggie is less so. "I'm never having kids." Oh no! Poor Trunks. Loved the part with Puar and Radditz, they are my second favorite pairing in this. I love them. So cute. I knew somehow everyone (Zarbon, Bulma, etc) would meet up. I wonder how Vegeta is going to react though...hmm. I like the Androids but I'm so suspicious of them. Should I be? I'm going to have to read to find out, I know." Again, I loved it as always! Great job! Until next chapter, byebye! | Title: happy anniversary!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2011 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I, for one, am happy that u continue to update this fic. I truly enjoy your writing, and hope u never stop writing b/v fics. LOL! Anyway, love the scenes between krillan and eighteen. I've grown to love all the couples in this fic. Although, I'm not a fan of goku and chichi. I don't mind them so much in this story. Thanks for the quick update. | Reviewed By: Kaitlyn On: May 16, 2011 17:16 PDT
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Masterful, as always! | Title: ch 40
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2011 07:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really love the introduction of the Androids, I also liked how you introduced them with Krillan's discovery, at first i was thinking who is the blonde that Krillian found, I was racking my brain, and even thought, no way is it Mrs Briefs, lol, I squealed in excitement when i realised it was the androids. You keep introducing new twists and turns to this story which never ceased to keep me hooked. The previous chapters with Zarbon's escape the introduction of new characters, Goku healing (that was a cute goku and Chichi moment, by the way, when she was drying him off I was like awww). You really have the Android characterisations so well written, you manage to merge the human with the synthetic, yet at the same time show the conflict between these two components as the Androids struggle to integrate, missing social cues, misinterpretations. I really can't wait to see where you go with this, and what role the Androids will play, especially with the fearsome, balsy, yet sassy, Bulma Briefs as their 'Mother' (I liked that). Red Station has managed to build up quite the army, 2 Supersaiyan's, 3 Androids, 3 saiyans, a half saiyan, and Kami, wow. Although I wonder if Dr Gero's programme of the Androids is completely gone, he seems like the sort of person that will always have a back up, some failsafe or trigger. Oh I also liked the interaction between Dende and Bulma, it was a very touching scene, showing the struggles and turmoils that are placed upon a leader, especially at such a young age. I really don't want this story to end, hope there is at least 100 more chapters (bats eyelashes) lol. Seriously though, this is the only dragonball z story I read | | Pages (25): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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