| "Hello Daddy!" Reviews/Comments [ 122 ] |
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: June 14, 2009 04:46 EDT
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EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! oh man either way this chapter was amazing! please please update! and for some reason i thought inuyasha would have a small suspision that kagome's sonwas his, but oh well. the story is getting better and better XD
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Reviewed By: Kristin M On: June 13, 2009 19:38 EDT
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Ohhh. That was a really mean cliffhanger... I'm going on vacation away from any computers for a while, and this is going to be on my mind the entire time! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 18:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so cute! And wanting to know who the father is really has me anticipating the next chapter. It could easily be InuYasha, but since it hasn't been directly stated or thought yet...I don't know, I have a feeling its someone else (with a specific someone in mind) :D Either way, I'm interested to find out. I wonder if InuYasha will at the surprise party and what Miroku/Sango's reactions will be to seeing him there. Until the next chapter! I'm really looking forward to it! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 18:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it's great. Hurry up and update I want to know who's at the door,mmmm could it be Kikyo?
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 20:54 EDT
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Good beginning. Keishi is sooo adorable.
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: GloomingPeace On: June 02, 2009 08:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More! More! More! Keishi is just adorable.... and me likes the stage that has been set. You just put a big goofy smile on my face =] ~XP
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Reviewed By: Kristin M On: June 01, 2009 18:50 EDT
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This is sooo great!!! T want to see where it is going. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Golden_Tuna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 18:32 EDT
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very eventful first chapter! love it! looks promising
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Reviewed By: pennylane On: May 31, 2009 14:56 EDT
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i really like it so far! is inuyasha going to figure out keishi is his? cute story. keep up the good work!
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Title: I Like!
Reviewed By: MikoPrincess16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 14:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great beggining. Really captures my interest. I'm looking foward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 13:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How cute!! I have read other stories on how Inuyasha left Kagome and didn't know she got pregnant so on and so forth. But none of them started out like this! I can't wait to see what happens. Tee hee!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: May 31, 2009 13:12 EDT
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WOW, this story is going to be amazing, the first chapter already has me at the edge of my seat! please please update as soon as possible, if its only going to be 8 chapters or so please please update. PLEASE!!! love secret
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 12:44 EDT
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good story , please update soon!
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Reviewed By: i_really_love_this_story! On: May 31, 2009 12:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is truly amazing! can't wait for the update! =)
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 04:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, man I can't wait till you update this story it's good.
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