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Title: :o
Reviewed By: kyonkichi-luver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 03:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you updated. The whole chapter was adorable from start to finish. I loved it. And don't worry about rude ppl saying how much you suck. I mean, everyone is entitled to their own opinion but if they really don't like what you're writing, nobody is making them read it. You're an excellent writer and your work is some of the best I have read. You keep doing what you're doing :D. And update soon!
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Reviewed By: smileymiko On: June 08, 2010 02:21 EDT
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Have you really gotten emails telling you how to write the story? Because this story is well written and absolutely adorable! Please keep up the good work and please update soon!
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Title: a felow writer
Reviewed By: bks On: April 03, 2010 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you story, its sweetdrama.
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Reviewed By: creampuff819 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2010 21:10 EST
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i love it!!! ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE EVER READ!!!! (and i've read alot...)
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Reviewed By: Inu-chan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2010 00:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my KAMI!!! I love this so much! It's adorable and I really hope you update soon! I really like how you don't portray Kikyou as a "slutty-whore" but she's still an antagonist to a sense. I honestly hope there's a happy ending for EVERYONE in this story!
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Reviewed By: creampuff819 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2010 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story!! I did not expect inu and Kag to make up that quick though...
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Reviewed By: Megami_dr1 On: January 11, 2010 18:40 EST
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Really cute story thus far! Cant wait for the update
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: January 10, 2010 21:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Upate soon I need to know whats going to happens next
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Title: Brilliant
Reviewed By: Jayman206 On: January 10, 2010 04:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If i could rate higher i would. Maybe a little more on kagome and inuyasha's past? but this story is by far one of the very best i have read in a while you must continue.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2010 10:34 EST
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YAYYYYYYYY....Finally they sort of admit their feelings...I just cant wait till Inuyasha finally realizes its his son....oh boy...sry for your loss and I hope 2010 is better for you...we are all hear for ya so your not alone XD Cant wait for the next chapter so dont keep us waiting toooo long XP
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2010 03:33 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things weren't going well for inuyasha & kagome... good though that the people close to them are helping them out... glad that inuyasha didn't give up on kagome... looks like kagome finally followed her heart... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2010 03:29 EST
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I really like this story. I just read all seven chapters in one sitting, so I guess that's saying something. I like how it flows. I like how you portrayed the characters. But there are a few things you might want to fix. It has to do with time. If Inuyasha and Kagome haven't seen each other in three years and Keishi just had his third birthday that means the last time they saw each other was either when she was in her last trimester (the stage where women look like they swallowed a basketball) or right after she gave birth. And if Kagome couldn't go to Sango and Miroku's wedding because she was giving birth, then their anniversary falls on Keishi's birthday. I find it hard to believe Sango would have let Miroku forget their anniversary. Also there is no way they could be married for 2 years and have Keishi be 3 years old. Another thins is that medical school alone takes 4 years, which is after 4 years of college, and then there are the years Internship, Residency and Fellowship (that would be the Demon Medicine Specialization) which all totaled out is at least twelve to thirteen years after graduating high school... so Kagome can't be a fully licensed and practicing doctor in under three years after high school. And Inuyasha should have known the Higurashi family for way more than 7 years if he was supposed to be friends with Kagome before his mother died when they were small children. And lastly Inuyasha and Kikyo had to be dating for much longer than 3 years if they were paling around with Kagome for years before she got pregnant. So the easiest fixes I see if you want to keep Keishi at three years old, are that Kagome and Inuyasha haven't seen each other in a almost four years. That Kagome had just finished medical school and it was her Residency that she was going to do in America as cover for when she was pregnant. And Kagome needs another reason why she couldn't attend Sango and Miroku's wedding, like Keishi was very sick, or she was stuck in surgery on some patient, which would mean Miroku didn't forget both Keishi's birthday party and his own anniversary. And since Kagome and Inuyasha were friends as kids (which means they are about the same age) it makes more sense for Kagome to be older than Kikyo (that may be a first, I know I've never seen a fanfic where that was done) which kinda fits with her being a super model since they start very young and are usually considered over the hill by 25, not to mention they tend to date "older" rich guys. I think that about covers it. Please don't take these suggestions as attacking you or your story, as I said I really like it I just tend to nitpick.
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Reviewed By: Kristin M On: January 08, 2010 00:26 EST
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YAY!!! They're together now! Thanks for the update! Hope that Inuyasha is able to put two and two together soon...though, where would the story be then?
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2010 23:25 EST
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I liked this chapter. It was very sweet. I like the part where Inuyasha yells out to the world that it's not over with Kagome. And Sesshoumaru cracks me up. Good job and good luck with your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2010 20:20 EST
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u forgot me but that's ok it wasn't BORING! it just wasn't as wild as the others
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