| "Hello Daddy!" Reviews/Comments [ 122 ] |
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 09:11 EDT
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I think the chapter was good. I like seeing Keishi and Inuyasha bond. I wonder how Sesshoumaru would act around Keishi. Or how Keishi would act around Sesshoumaru's pup. I like the image of Rin and Sesshoumaru's son. Oh goodness. So many cute little hanyou!!! I want one. Tee hee.
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 03:30 EDT
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i am so glad the rin and the baby are ok!! this story just keeps getting better and better! i cant wait for your next update! one question though: when is Inuyasha going to realize that he is Keishi's Father? anyways Good luck and keep writing fantastic chapters! oh and i dont mind if you make the story longer! :D
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 01:42 EDT
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OMG!!! I am loving this story. It's so cute. I look forward to (remembering to) reviewing!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that rin and the baby are fine... was quite a fight between sesshoumaru and inuyasha... when will kagome tell inuyasha the truth about keishi... will inuyasha find out first?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: fireandicepixie On: July 15, 2009 00:13 EDT
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i cant wait for more of your story. btw, there is a website that is just for inu/kag stories. its called Eternal Destiny. please check it out at www.ik-eternal.net
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Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say i really like where this story is going! I love your style of writing too. I thought i would just let you know. Im a very picky person when it comes to reading inu fan fics. They have to be lengthy, have a good style of writing (no first person crap), and entertain me :) Your story is very adaquate. I cant wait till inuyasha actually finds out about him being the father. I wonder if hes going to kick his own ass :) That would be funny.... Well hopefully you update soon. Your a great writer. No pressure on updating though as a writer i know what its like... I never update haha Dont listen to my updating advice. UPDATE lol
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 23:09 EDT
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OMG...loved the chapter...I was freaking out in the end wondering if she lost the baby but I am glad she didnt...great suspense...epppppp update soon...I wuv it so much
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: July 14, 2009 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm your making your story more than eight chapters cause I want to see Inuyaha and Kagome relationship grow and I love Keishi he's so cute update soon
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Reviewed By: VuzeGo On: July 14, 2009 22:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy the direction the story is going towards, and i cannot wait to read the reasons for keeping the fathers identity a secret. Keep up the good work and i look forward to reading more :)
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Reviewed By: BK On: July 14, 2009 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely fantastic. I am so glad you deciced to extend the story past 8 chapters. Your extremely talented and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thanks for writing this story and also for the quick updates.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 20:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowzerz :) I like this one!!! I can't wait to read Inuyasha's reaction when he finds out... Please keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 19:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Adorable! Haha, and you have no complaints from me about making this story longer. I love it! Though the whole Kagome/InuYasha have a child he doesn't know about thing has been done you write it in a way that is completely fresh, and new, and fun to read. Keishi's character especially is a favorite. He BARELY spoke and I still found it cute! The bit of Sessh/Rin was precious, too. Hehe, he told her it was a boy. I'm VERY much enjoying this story. Can't wait for the next update! ~Amber :D
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 12:15 EDT
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ohhh I am so glad that I found this story...it is really written so well and that is incredibly hard to find these days so go you...beautiful story and i cant wait for the next chapter so update soon XD
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [notsigned in] On: July 12, 2009 00:52 EDT
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please please PLEASE update your other story! its seriously my favorite! but, i like this story too, great job writing(:
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 20:10 EDT
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More!!! Really getting good. You're keeping my attention. I'm wondering the when and and where with Inuyasha and hoping for more closeness between them. You made Keishi so cute!!! I really hope Sesshoumaru and Rin's relationship will be...hmmm...I dunno, cute, I guess. Good luck with the next chapter!
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