| "Hello Daddy!" Reviews/Comments [ 122 ] |
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 13:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... really nice that inuyasha stayed with kagome and keishi... good that they spent time together... too bad he doesn't know the truth... seems that sesshoumaru knows about kagome's secret... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
|
Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: July 11, 2009 13:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it I can't wait to see what happpens next
|
Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 11:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew it! I freaking knew it!!! Why doesn't Kagome just tell him? Great update, anyway, keep up the good work!
|
Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: July 07, 2009 19:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Keishi he so cute I love your story you need to update already
|
Title: Me gustalo (I like it)
Reviewed By: MikoPrincess16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 00:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this is quickly becoming one of my top favs on this site. I admire how you changed up Inuyasha by making him a little more um... humany (lol) by making him nervous and shy. Yeah i kinda figured out who the father is... can't wait until he finds out. Update when you can!
|
Title: Uncle Sango XD
Reviewed By: GloomingPeace On: July 02, 2009 22:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh... we made some real progress here. What I love the most I think is the repeated appearance of the "scent motif" if you will. Scent is one of the intangible things we tend to get attached to... and I imagine this is magnified X10 for the Inus. Also: the fact Inuyasha is so attracted to her scent just emphasizes how genetically compatible they are!! ^^ This chapter,however, has made me question what Inuyash's reaction will be once he finds out who Keichi's father is... I previously thought he'd be eranged, but that wasnt his reaction to finding out Kagome hadn't left the country. So now "hurt" and "understanding" are also on tha table I suppose. Hmmm.... gotta think on that one... and while I do, please come back soon!!! :D
|
Title: Love it :)
Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 01:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fan fic
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 01:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... cute how inuyasha and keishi get along... but kinda wondering why inuyasha doesn't know or pick up who keishi's father is?... they are both hanyou - can't he smell the similarities - miroku saw it... nice that kagome and inuyasha are spending time together...what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
|
Reviewed By: star555555528(nsi) On: July 01, 2009 23:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
OMG please update soon this is so cute!!!
|
Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2009 22:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah...I guess my "conspiracy" theory on who the father is has no chance then if I picked up on the right hints. Absolutely love how awkward and nervous InuYasha is feeling and the beginnings of their new relationship. I'm itching for more of the past to be revealed, too and to find out who the daddy is, how it'll effect Yash/Kag, and all that good stuff. As usual, Keishi delivered the cute and this chapter delivered the awesome. Can't wait for the next update! Love it! ~Amber :D
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 05:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
|
Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UGH!!!! EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!! WHY???? ok so i know why but that was an awesome chapter. i cant wait to read more! soooo good! keep it up and thank you for the awesome story!
|
Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 11:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
usually stories like this start off with a good 1st chapter and fizzle, but you're doing a good job so far. Good luck with the next chapter!
|
Reviewed By: secret35 On: June 14, 2009 04:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! oh man either way this chapter was amazing! please please update! and for some reason i thought inuyasha would have a small suspision that kagome's sonwas his, but oh well. the story is getting better and better XD
|
Reviewed By: Kristin M On: June 13, 2009 19:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ohhh. That was a really mean cliffhanger... I'm going on vacation away from any computers for a while, and this is going to be on my mind the entire time! Can't wait to see what happens next!
|
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
