| "Animalistic" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: marlene_dragon2 On: March 12, 2011 07:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the beginning of your story. the psicotic vegeta that can´t understand that bulma is watching him constantly because his sexy body :D and he thinks she´s spying him great point of view ;) and the Bulma´s mother interruption has a lot of sense. They are making hot noises jeje |
Reviewed By: Violet62 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2010 10:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, It made me feel so damn hot! Great job!
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Title: fan-tas-tic!!!
Reviewed By: bulma183 On: November 27, 2009 16:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely amazing, I've been reading dozens of fanfics and you are definitly in my top 3 of all time favorits!! Love it!!
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Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 18:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This pairing tends to be pretty hit-n-miss. Now this, this is amazing. This is where it's at! You can easily see this happening; you captured Vegita perfectly, and i love the references you used for him via Bulma's thoughts - it definitely fits particularly with him at this stage in the series. Who would had thought it would even had a mini non-classic comedic moment - I'm overly impressed! Awesome job!
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Reviewed By: Cellar_Door [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant! If I could find a better word to describe this piece, I'd use it!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: DBZ4eva On: July 02, 2009 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is SO gratifyig to read a V/B fic where Veeta doesn't uddenly become putty in Bulma's hands. You're version of Vegeta is so true to him, I think this is how he would be. Well done you!!
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Title: Again: Holy sh*t!
Reviewed By: Shiranui :) On: June 22, 2009 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"… but something tells me that I will enjoy you." Oh my gosh, I looove that one. How sexy is that?! That is simply brilliant, dear. Really! I love your style and, as I said on DA I love your version of Vegeta. All dirty, sexy and so so manly. And the whole Lemon made the air burn here XD .
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 00:04 EDT
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Oh I love it. Dark and sensual at the same time. Great read.
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Title: In fewer words than I said on DA...
Reviewed By: Unholy_Rage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2009 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fucking awesome. Sexy, raw and dirty without being ridiculous, and a fantastic read.
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