| "Wonderfully Imperfect" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: drkvampress161 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2010 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, this is fantastic. I enjoyed seeing Kagome and Inuyasha's parents stories, I think it definately helped show why the characters are acting the way they are. Sesshoumaru is very OOC, but I'm usually pretty okay with that when it's AU because if you don't have his mother and dad die and have him blame/hate InuYasha, then there's no real reason for his characteristics to be the same. I love the way you make InuYasha talk, it's very close to how I think InuYasha would talk in modern day whole being a prominent member of society. I'm enjoying this immensely. By the way, I may have missed this but do you have a beta? I know that when I write I miss a thousand things even when I read the story 10x over. Please continue writing, I think that this story has great potential once it really gets rolling.
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Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 02:26 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES YES ENCORE, I wish there was a little more detail in newest work but I LOVE the story line! Absolutely entertaining! Thank you so much for updating I didn't think it'd happen!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 19:03 EDT
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Uhm...very detailed =) update soon!
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Reviewed By: OMFG I LOVE IT! On: March 28, 2010 12:33 EDT
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That was sooo hot! i loved it! MORE MORE! you areah-mazeing
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Reviewed By: loyal reader On: March 25, 2010 18:52 EDT
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ooooooooohhhhhh my fucking god more!
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2010 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEPPPPP!!! thank you so much for the update :) i loved it! please keep up the awesome work :)
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2010 21:46 EDT
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That was Such an amazing chapter! I loved it!
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Title: Lynlyn
Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 22:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue!!!! I will cry!
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2010 16:06 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grammar problems can be overlooked, but just be careful with it. Be careful with your descriptions, sometimes it was a bit confusing as to who you were referring to, but overall your story was amazing! please write more!! please! i loved it! keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: Kayna On: March 17, 2010 09:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories I've ever read and i hope that you will update soon because this story has great potential.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2010 16:08 EDT
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Awwe! He's so protective of her! Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: Shaelyn Bobaelyn On: March 15, 2010 19:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE, I need it! I am a fiend, I'm a beast, I'm a junkie for fanfics, and I've gotten so into this PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2010 23:28 EST
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Okay...you win. I like this one better. You happy now?
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: CrazyForInu On: March 08, 2010 10:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy cow figarra! That was so good!! Update soon okay? Because i love this story. Much love!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 21:20 EST
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Okay...lets see if you can. I will admit it was a good chapter. See if you can do it again!
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