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| "Serendipity" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2009 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're welcome, and wonderful work on the newest chapter, as well. I did notice a few little boo-boo's that you should probably go back through and take care of, but nothing too severe. I loved that moment at the beginning when Rin basically pointed out how both humans and youkai are going to automatically be biased in their own ways, and how hanyou are the true mediators. Along that same line of thinking, it's going to be hard for Kagome to truly get Inuyasha to realize that he's not two halves of nothing, and instead, he's really the best of both worlds, but I can see that their relationship is so far progressing quite nicely. I'm sure everything's going to go swimmingly for a while and then suddenly something crappy will happen, but then it'll get nice again, LOL, so I can take the roller coaster. I can feel it coming; I'm ready for it. This is a really good story.
| Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2009 02:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! What a cute chapter!! I love how the progress between Kag and Inu. It's slow but not too slow, it's steady but something always breaks the cycle. Hopefully the cycle doesn't break in Part 2. :)
| Reviewed By: anon01 On: December 29, 2009 08:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv your story could u plz update it as soon as possible. PLZ, PLZ,PLZ. thanx.
| Title: Nice!!!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: December 22, 2009 00:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice dream scene! Keep it up I like the story!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2009 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You definitely cannot allow yourself to feel discouraged if you receive fewer reviews than expected. I say you write what you want to write because you want to. Although I completely understand how it's nice to receive reviews, to know for a fact just how much other people are enjoying your story. On that note, wonderful chapter! I was pretty sure going in that it was going to turn out to be a dream sequence, but that didn't make it any less enjoyable, and I think for a rating of Y, which would be R in the movie world, you were perfectly safe. I also love what you are starting to do with Sesshoumaru and Rin on the side-story, and I'm thinking that somewhere down the line Inuyasha's father might become more aggressive, but then suddenly he won't have as vindictive of a sidekick as he used to. Sesshoumaru still has a long ways to go before he's ready for any sort of revelation, but it'll get there. As for Inuyasha and Kagome, I can't wait to see how you decide to progress their relationship. I'm wondering who will end up confessing their feelings first, Kagome...or Inuyasha's youkai side. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Sunrise On: December 21, 2009 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-.- You had to make it a dream. You just had to. Haha. I'm glad you aren't going to give up. Too many authors on MM have given up on their stories, leaving many readers sorely disappointed, especially if the story is getting to the good parts. Hopefully, you will not become one of those authors and finish the story. ^.^ Looking forward to that next chapter, cause i have no clue what's going to happen. n.n
| Title: Reviews
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2009 11:40 CST
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Don't give up writing a story because the people reading your story haven't reviewed. For some reason, the readers at MM (like myself, speaking for myself) feel stupid leaving a review saying "Good chapter, can't wait for the next", I feel embarressed saying that cause it makes me sound mindless. I am thouoghly enjoying your story, and I really can't wait for the next chapter. The story explores Inu and Kag from a slightly different angle than is usual, and I really enjoy that. I am very particular about the stories I read, but very tongue-tied when telling why. I am no author, I leave that to you guys, and you never fail to delight. I am well on my way to being completely disabled, and the one joy I have is reading fan fiction. These stories you budding authors post for our parusal are like food to me, they keep me going, but sometimes it is painful to type, so don't let the lack of reviews faze you, some times it is because I don't know what to say, and sometimes becuase it hurts to much to say it, but I will always try to respond to author distress. Keep an eye on the reader count, it will let you know who has found your wonderful story.
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2009 06:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasps* i wanted more!! OMG!!
| Reviewed By: Suzumi-chan_17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2009 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I like the chapter...it's also my birthday and this is one of the greatest birthday presents ever...seeing an update to one of my favorite stories...More plz!!!!
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: October 17, 2009 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i had to read this again seen that i havent been near my emails... but nawwww Iunyasha and Kagome are finally friends :P
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a second there, I thought Inuyasha was going to lose track of time, and then Kagome would suddenly hear his dad shouting vilely to know why his disgusting being was still in their house, when he was ordered to make himself scarce for their dinner guests lest they vomit at the sight of him. That would've definitely been a wake-up call for Kagome, but I guess it's just not time for her to know yet, and in a way I'm kind of glad her comment broke the spell and got him off the phone, because at least now we can assume he got out of the house before he would've gotten himself in trouble. I also like how you're hinting that slowly but surely, Sesshoumaru might not be such a prick to him, if Rin keeps managing to worm her way inside the layer of ice around his heart. Loving that Sess/Rin side-story. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad Inuyasha is softening up. Can't wait to read more....
| Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 07:18 CDT
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i love this story!!! if only you could update more often... but i totally understand how much of a killer school can be so i guess i'll just have to be patient!!XD but seriously this story is Addicting!! keep up the good work^^
| Reviewed By: inukag4ever18 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an amazing chapter. I love how you had Inuyasha going from frustrated over the Kagome getting kissed by Hojo to completely forgetting about his own anger with his concern over Kagome. Please update soon cause this has become one of my favorite fanfics. Keep up the excellant work
| Reviewed By: secret35 On: August 16, 2009 20:51 CDT
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WOW what a twist! i thought when the chapter said Kiss i thought it was going to bewteen inuyasha and kagome, man that gave me a run for the money. nicley done! XD. man the whole situation bewtten them in this chapter is scary, kagome has know idea that inuyasha likes her that much.... well it could just be all confusing for them but what do i know ;, hehe, but please please update as soon as possible PLEASE XD!!!!!
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