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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! It's rather similar to another modern day fic on here somewhere, where InuYasha is actually physically abused by his father, but you definitely explore the concept with your own originality. I also love this because it's a modern day fic where InuYasha lives sort of like he actually did in the manga, instead of being some rich, buff, womanizer that people like to make him out to be. He seems canon, even in a non-canon setting, it's great! Keep up the good work!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter (Transformation). Although it was a short chapter, i still enjoyed it. (:
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Reviewed By: InuyashaKagome4lyfe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
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The story is great so far, but I'd really like for you to remember that when a new character speaks, their dialouge must ALWAYS be on a new line. Anyway, like I said, your story is great. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2009 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Inuyasha got hurt but at least he stood up to his dad. Good for him. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2009 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!! Absolutly love it!! Tee hee! I haven't read a fic like this where Inuyasha's Dad isn't the greatest and it's something fresh. Keep updating! As long as you update i shall continue to review!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
N'AWW!! too cute XD but Inuyasha's father.. i dont know what to think there.... *growls*
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Title: Yup!
Reviewed By: lil jynx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 03:00 CDT
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So far, this is awesome. Your writing style is so familiar...like mine!! not to scare you. Its reaaly nice so far, just worried about u portray InuYasha. I think he maybe just a smidge too mean and Kagome just a bit to innocent. Don't take my word for gospel, i'm just along for the ride. Keep up the good work. By the way, nice title. It caught my eye.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
n'awww is Kagome breaking our Inuyasha's shell?? XD
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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n'awww it looks like Inuyasha thniks there might be trouble with Kagome XD
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still likin it... Boy I really want to punch his stupid dad and brohters lights out. Makes me sad when I read the discusting things they say. Hope he gets away from them. Looking forward to next update.
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Reviewed By: transatlanticism [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 16:54 CDT
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This is getting good :D
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Reviewed By: transatlanticism [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 16:54 CDT
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This is getting good :D
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 05:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn... i wouldnt thought you would make InuTaisho like that O.o ouch... and Oooo Inuyasha deserve that one!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2009 08:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*giggles* yea i think you got Inuyasha character great XD and that moment between Sang and Miroku made me laugh XD
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2009 04:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far. Looking forward to next update.
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