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Reviewed By: DaggersAngel11 On: April 16, 2015 00:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best kind of story is the kind where you walk away after
reading a chapter and feel the intense emotions that your favorite
character's feel, no matter happy or sad, and this story did the
incredible feat of just that. I loved the roller coaster of
emotions you took us through. The entire story line was AMAZING!!
The way you tied in her scar and Miroku and his fathers "curse" was
so imaginative and just your writing in general is beautiful and I
can't believe the cravings I felt when I couldn't get back to
reading!! I am so happy about this ending and I just wanted you to
know that the way you got in their heads and dissected their very
thoughts and true-nature's had me falling in love with them more
and more with each read. You are brilliant. Thank you for this :)
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2011 21:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...has it really been a whole year? I was afraid this story was gone, but it was not forgotten, apparently not even by you! Sooooooo glad you updated it, and I'm cool with the way you wrapped everything up for good with this one final chapter. Kind of get the feeling you just wanted to end the story to be done with it, but as a loyal fan I greatly appreciate the fact that you did decide to actually conclude this story rather than leaving us all hanging for the rest of eternity, and the ending didn't feel rushed or forced, either. I thought you wrapped everything up nicely, tying up all the loose ends. Don't really need an epilogue with this type of story, 'cause it gives the vibe of 'we can only work towards the future from here' and who knows what the future may bring, right? Nicely done. |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2010 03:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo...nice update! I was expecting Sango to go and see him, but I wasn't expecting it to play out the way that you did it, and I'm guessing neither was Sango! Are we going to get a recap from her point of view start of next chapter? That would be nice, but I suppose not really necessary. Whatever you want to do, just so long as you update! ;-)
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Reviewed By: Fireserpent14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2010 00:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
I was so excited when I saw in my inbox that this had a new chapter, and I almost died of happiness when they kissed, only to be crushed again when she said she was leaving! NO! Next chapter please!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2010 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update, looks like things are moving right along. Glad Akiko decided to bring up the 'Miroku' subject, urging Sango to see him, even if it's only to say goodbye. Good angle. If we can just get those two in the same room... Looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: Fireserpent14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2010 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im scared something bad will happen even though I can finally see hope!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2010 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow...powerful indeed. I would so love for Sango to have coinsidentally been coming around the corner and overhearing all of that, though I doubt it. Still, Miroku makes an excellent point. He cannot make Sango happy, but I do hope that Sango realizes that she can allow herself to be happy in his presense.
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Reviewed By: Fireserpent14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2010 18:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Beautifully powerful. I was listening to a playlist and when I opened this and started reading it "Meant to Live" by Switchfoot came on. It was so perfect. And now I have knots in MY stomach because I'm terrified he wont do anything and Sango will leave! NO! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! Makes me want to read more...so hurry up with the next update...LOL. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Fireserpent14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2010 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I was so afraid you'd stopped writing for this fanfiction, it's such a complicated and beautiful story at the time! Sorry I cant write more, but I saw that you had written another chapter and I all-too-eagerly dropped my essay to come read this, so have to force myself back to that now, but thank you for this wonderful shining star in the midst of my horrible essay!
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Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Fanguild On: February 23, 2010 12:14 EST
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your story has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best Drama for the Fourth Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join the group yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com) If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com (IYFG Moderator at g mail dot com). Congratulations again! ~ Lyiint
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Reviewed By: Griddlebone On: February 15, 2010 12:46 EST
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It's interesting to finally get a look inside Miroku's head, and at his thus far mysterious past, and how it's made him into the man he is in this alternate universe. You've got some nice parallels to the canon going, and you've also managed to avoid going with the most obvious ways to do that, so kudos for that. What also comes through in this piece is Miroku's inner strength and his ability to deal with crisis and strong emotion by falling back on responsibility, or drawing into himself. My one quibble is a (relatively) minor thing at the very end of this piece. Even though you've done a very plausible job of setting it up, I just can't wrap my mind around the idea of Miroku crying.
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 00:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written. I am certain Sango still feels their connection, although what remains a mystery is how long she might be willing to try and pretend that she doesn't. I eagerly await the next installment.
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Title: Chapter 7 - Finding Beauty in Negative Spaces
Reviewed By: Eikyuu Kosai Awards [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2010 01:56 EST
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your fic has won 2nd Place for Best Lemon at Eikyuu Kosai, the Miroku/Sango Fandom Awards. Established in 2009, this group strives to recognize those outstanding pieces of fanfiction and art from the Inuyasha universe, which put special emphasis on the Mir/San pairing. Twice a year, our members come together to nominate and vote in 17 different categories, including a special 'Hidden Treasure' award, for those gems that might have been missed the first time around. To learn more about Eikyuu Kosai, please visit http://community.livejournal.com/mirsanawards/ Our complete list of winners (and information on where to pick up your banner) can be found here: http://community.livejournal.com/mirsanawards/26725.html Our next term will commence in July 2010. The group will be open to recommendations during our downtime, so please feel free to join in the proceedings! Congratulations once again! **Please note: you may receive this notification multiple times on the same fic, if it has been nominated into different categories.**
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Reviewed By: Fireserpent14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 17:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You tell him girl! Yeah Sango! This just keeps getting better and better! I love your style of writing and how you portray emotions, so beautifully and at the same time, so absolutely heart wrenching. Please continue this story, I can't wait for the next chapter, happy writing!
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