| "Unwritten" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2010 12:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I saved this to my PC after the last chapter was posted & I ran across it last night so I decided to see if there was any more of it & am rather disappointed that there hasn't been at least another chapter posted in the year since the last chapter.
|
Reviewed By: ice vixen x (not signed in) On: September 24, 2009 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm, i really like the story. but what about inu, oh nooo. she has to find him and be with him, she cant get with kur if he's still alive! oh no. Well, can't wait to see what you do with this, keep up the good work.
|
Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2009 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's good, I'm enjoying it a lot. Hope that someone finds Inuyasha. That's got to be rough on him. And as much as I like Kurama and Hiei I think she needs him. But I'm rambling. I like it, it's good, and I look forward to more.
|
Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 21:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well hello there! Well I just have recently have met the yoyo gang and well what can I say they are awesome! Anywho, I really like your story so far. I am confused about Hiei's feelings for Kagome. I am not sure if he's acting that way because he 'likes' her or if it is because he knows that she is carrying a 'forbidden' child like he is. I am pretty sure you are going to answer that one for me though. Please keep up the good work!
|
Title: love it
Reviewed By: Aya177 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2009 04:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it hope theres a three some kag,hiei,kru. but anyways love the story
|
Reviewed By: NaturesPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 14:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it a lot! Not a fan of Inuyasha being the father, but then again I never liked Inuyasha anyway... Is this a Kur/Kag or a Kag/Hiei or all three... that would be cool too. Looking forward to your next update. Thanks for keeping consistant about the updates!
|
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 02:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, in the 2nd chapter you said that Keiko's pregnant with twins & in chapter 3 you have her home alone with the twins so it sounds like they're already born & are causing havoc, & didn't you say that Keiko & Kagome are sharing a co-ed dorm that no one else wants to stay at? You may want to write yourself notes on who is where doing what since you also seem to have Yusuke shifting between moving in with Kurama in ch 1, being somewhere else in ch 2 & back to staying with Kurama in ch 3.
|
Reviewed By: midnight3498 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 00:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it can't wait to read more
|
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 23:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well I like the plot, execution is a bit iffy, lots of spelling/word choice goofs, you have common which should be come on or com'on & lots of your/you're errors, your means it belongs to you where as you're is a contraction & like any contraction it means 2 words were put together, in this case you are. Hope you continue it.
|
