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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2010 00:41 EDT
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meant to review the day you put up the new chapter but I got caught up in life :) but here I am to say thank you for giving us jiji back. :) no matter how short he will be in....
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2010 23:30 EDT
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woohoo an update. sorry really happy to see an update though this is one of my favorite stories. a few typos in there but not so extreme they distracted or detracted from the sotry. I can't wait to find out what was in the lake or how kagome's training goes. Loved the image of Jiji with his hair on fire frowning at shippou. I hope to see/hear more from Jiji soon.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2010 01:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...You've made me speechless. This story is fucking AWESOME. I love the storyline, and the way you've formed Kagome. It's great. You've kept the story real to the actual show, and yet, you've made it more... REAL because you gave them human problems that would occur in that time. Kagome's forced marriage was something I didn't expect, but greatly enjoyed. I DID expect that the child belonged to Sess, but I wasn't sure you would add that twist. I was so upset that he died though. You character Kuro... god I love Kuro. Out of all the tearjerkers in the story, his goodbye to Kagome and the events that followed to his death almost had me sobbing. Actually, I'd hoped that you would make Kagome's child Kuro's incarnation. lol. In a way you did make it happen. I also appreciate the plot building you formed between Sess and Kagome. Like you mentioned, you're not just throwing them at each other and they completely fall in love. It makes the story more real (which I already gushed over.) By far, my favorite person in the whole thing is Kuro. I can't WAIT until he starts talking!! Anyways I can't wait until the next chapter! Hope nothing horrible happens to you and you Don't get writer's block or anything like that (knock on wood) Thank you Sango P.S. - Having Kuro pee on Sesshoumaru? Fucking PRICELESS. I lmfao P.P.S. - Is Kagome gonna have a confrontation between Inuyasha and Kikyo soon? If she does will you PLEASE just kill that bitch off? Kikyo needs to DIE.
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Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2010 18:08 EDT
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I'm so happy u finally updated.I really enjoy this fic and I was starting to think u weren't going to finish it which would be a shame.
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2010 02:09 EDT
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Ure wierd but i like tht abt u. the update was awesome!!!!!!!!!!! U didnt disappoint me.... I'll be waiting for ur next update eagerly...
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Title: Coming back?
Reviewed By: NanDeMo-offline On: September 16, 2010 22:05 EDT
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I just wanted to let you know I still think about this story, wonder whats going to happen with it. :) You really are a great writer!
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Title: Constructive Criticism
Reviewed By: SinsofDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2010 04:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this fanfiction for a while and I think the story line is great. Your character development of Kagome is amazing, I love what she's become and I love her relationship with Sesshomaru. But There are many times when I feel like scrolling down the page and skipping parts, maybe you could cut chapters in half and eliminate some of excess detail and dialog. Focus only on the juicy really important aspects of each chapter. Also I have trouble differentiating when a sentence begins and ends, maybe you and format it into more of a paragraph sequence? Anyway I think the story is great, love Kagome's fierceness. And props to you for having such dedication in continuing it. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: wynterfrost1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2010 13:58 EDT
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love it please write more keep'em coming
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2010 20:46 EDT
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i missed this! :) thank you so much for the update!
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2010 00:08 EDT
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Come on, update already!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2010 11:59 EDT
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>.< Love your updates and love your story. :) And hope Kagome keeps the baby :D
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2010 02:12 EST
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I LOVE YOU! Seriously :D This was very sad...:( the poor baby, but I am happy the demons got free.
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Title: Loved It!!!!!
Reviewed By: ITWASGREAT On: February 21, 2010 18:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello I don't really write many reviews but I just had to write one for you. I love your story!!!! I checked every day just to see if you had updated yet. The story is so unusual and creative. Its like nothing I have ever read!!!! I love this story and I really wish that you will update more. God sometimes I wish it was like a book so I can just go out and buy the book to read the story all at once. Thank you for writing this story and please continue your work. Quickly!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 17:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. And you are very good at leaving cliff-hanger endings and making people wonder what is going to happen next. And I'm guessing the baby is either A)Jerkwad-lord's baby with her powers B)Sesshoumaru's baby (cause that had gone on just before jerkwad showed up and the baby is a drain on her powers after all) C)Kuro (because the baby is a drain on her powers, I can see having a Kami in your tummy doin' that) or a combination of A/C or B/C. Personally I think that if the baby is Kuro it'd be nice for him to be born as a hanyou so he isn't as weak cause I felt sorry for poor Kuro. Plus Kagome would make an awsome mother for him. Well that's my opinion. But I'll love it no matter how you twist it! Anxiously awaiting your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2010 19:31 EST
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T.T omg I hope she is ok? I wanna know what was up with the boy :P plz update soon i missed you >.
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