Title: No Such Thing as Fate
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 23:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't read fan fiction to grade them on grammar, I read for content, uniqueness(sp), plot and so forth, I believe that spelling and grammar are improved with writing. I'm really loving your story, I love the characters, your version of Kagome and Shippo. I love how Kagome is learning new things that will help her to grow strong and smart and eventually will make her lone journey easier. It's not the typical she leaves and get hurt and has to be saved, not that those beginnings aren't good, but your fic is refreshing and something new. Good going, I can't wait for reviews. I love getting to know your characters it's as if I can see them, I can feel what they feel. You are doing a great job and I'm loving it! Your excellent I can tell you really are enjoying writing this story. The only thing that bothers me a bit is that you sorta threatened to not post unless you get reviews. I understand reviews are good for direction and motivation, but you don't need it, your excellent! You don't need reviews for approval of your writing abilities, you just need confidence. I've read plenty of finished good and bad stories with zero reviews, now those authors have confidence and belived in their work, they had a story tell and they told it. You are on your way to telling an excellent story that has me checking two times a day or more for an update! Reviews can be great and uplifting, but don't use them to continue what you are doing. I know I don't have any thing posted and maybe I shouldn't say anything, that's why I don't flame, it's rude and uncalled for, I believe anyone brave enough to post and put themselves out there deserve proper respect, good or bad story. You are excellent! I'm looking forward to the males that Kagome will have to chose from!!! I can't wait to vote, which is a good idea that you are involving your fans, I am most definately a FAN!! Continue the good work I can't wait for more, I have no advice for your story in the area of what should happen next, because I think you are doing great and I can't wait to see where it goes! EXCELLENTLY AWESOME WORK!!! Write on! Much Love Jeweled Fairy
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