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Title: Ch. 5
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 14:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I like that Hoko is a good friend and the way she witnessed Inuyasha in action. Your Kagome is a strong character (if just a touch schizo with her feelings- I mean that in a good way.) I do hope you deal with her learning the secret relatively soon. She's too smart to keep thinking he's in a costume or surgically altered. Of course, the "reality" is a stretch for such a smart girl as well, but if there's a way to make it work, you will.
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Reviewed By: M.K.M. On: December 05, 2009 03:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. Simply amazing. I haven't found a well-written, enjoyable story such as this for many years. I admire every aspect of this story, and simply cannot wait for more! (Finished reading all your up-dated chapters last night and came back to review I loved it so much) Thank you for sharing.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2009 12:37 EST
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I love the plot line of your story. It is so creative and the way you combined traditional and AU is seamless. I love this style of writing in general and am always pleased to see it done in inventive ways. Poor girl, I never took "Dog shit" at it's literal meaning, but when applied to someone other than Inuyasha...hahaha. First sesshoumaru and now kouga. It's enough to make a person really self conscious. Good luck with your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2009 19:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh calm before the storm!! I have a feeling she's going to out of the dark so to speak soon, so exciting!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2009 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grreeatt update, things are definitely getting interesting and I am ever curious as to how everything is connected so Update soon =]
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2009 22:44 EST
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This is absolutely lovely. I tend to not read fan fiction until the stories are complete, but since I enjoyed your last one-shot so much--I decided that I would go ahead and read this before it ended and it is captivating. I love the slow tender love affair that pulls at your heartstrings. I love the hints of unspoken action, fights and gore. And I really love the alterego! I am a BIG fan of alterego stories and this one is no exception. Please keep on writing. You have fan. Also, I agree with another one of your reviewers, you need to change your summary. Give it a little re-write with a marketing angle. Take out the quote and just give a capsule-sized summary. Thanks for the fun ride so far.
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Reviewed By: chino-chan inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 15:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's absolutely impossible to stop reading this! i've tried, but i couldn't and skipped dinner to finish it. i'm absolutely waiting for a continuation, and i have to say again that this is one of the more interesting enthralling storied that I've ever read and i'm waiting for the unravelling of this all. Hugs ! Chino
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Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2009 08:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this. The pacing is terrific. Kagome's rational and somewhat self deluding mind is consistent and believable. (I've been there on the self deluding part. My Sweetie was invited into my bed with a "But no sex" warning from me that was followed with platonic spooning until the gentle touches got just a bit too exciting. 21 years of sharing a bed later... I'm glad I changed my mind.) Inuyasha stays true to the character. I love all the "superhero" stuff and him telling her he's a youkai despite her not believing. He's trying to be upfront with her and I like that. The mysteries are becoming clearer. Kanna's appearance was cheered by me. I hope we see some other characters now and then. Laughed at Sesshoumaru's perfume comment. Nicely worked.
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: November 07, 2009 12:08 EST
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OMG! you updated! and CONGRATES yout totaly deserve it! im so happy this story always seems to bring me in the best of moods XD. the romance is so beautiful, i just fall in love with inuyasha all over again, well more then usal ;, i can't wait for the next chapter im so excited. XD and again congrats!
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Reviewed By: bbbelana On: November 07, 2009 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I love it. It is maybe a little fast in the beginning but it will still be great! Love to see your next chapters about Iy double life etc. :-)
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 10:10 EST
Comment/Review:
YESS a ton of congratulations, you well deserve that award, update soon =]]
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Title: Congrats
Reviewed By: nameless04 On: November 07, 2009 00:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONGRATULATIONS on your nomination by the for Best AU/AR(I read lyiint's review). You totally deserve it!!! I've been a fan of this story from chapter 1 and I admit that I always await updates with bated breath.Congrats again....
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 22:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THIS STORY... u can expect to see plenty of my reviews in the future... one thing though, you tend to use the term "young woman" quite often ;]
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Title: WOOHOO!! I only had to wait a day!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 19:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She sure doesn't want to believe what she's been told. I wonder how long before she realizes. Maybe when she gets nabbed by the incredibly evil spider-man (lol). I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 17:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, I'm hooked! I can't wait for more.
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