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Reviewed By: LadyCash, not logged in On: April 29, 2013 01:01 EDT
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Hooray, I'm so glad to see this! What a tense, action packed set of chapters. Love the bits of subtle humor, and the interaction b/t the brothers. Going back to reread the beginning and get fully caught up. |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2010 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I never knew Noboru was the one who started the Great Meireki fire. I thought that was pure genius, by the way, incorporating such a detailed, historic event into your story. As much as I'm sure Kagome wanted to run after Noboru and ring his neck, she can hardly fault him his logic when you look at things from a time traveler's point of view. He had to start that fire...it was already in her history books. At least they were able to participate and save as many lives as they possibly could. I hope Inuyasha and Shippou aren't really sick and they'll be able to just get all the soot out of their lungs and then be fine. Guess I'll find out next chapter. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2010 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful update, as always. Keep 'em coming!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 13:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! Very interesting angle you're taking us down. I wonder if there's a connection between being a Hidden Christian and her blood burning youkai? After all, in the universe of Inuyasha, the spiritual side of things is quite real. Didn't they meet a water kami once early on in the story? It would make sense then, if you could allow all religions to co-exist despite certain aspects of some religions denouncing the legitimacy of others, that being Christian would have a 'burning' effect on those with demonic blood, like holy water. Of course I could be way off base if that part of it is a coincidence and you're going to reveal a new breed of spiritual humans that merely have burning blood regardless of their faith, but either way, neat idea! Looking forward to the next update, as always.
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Reviewed By: renniemama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2010 16:52 EDT
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Im working my way through this, and I like it so far. I just finished chapter 4 and thought "Did Miroku grow breasts?" cause that'd be the only way he could feed that baby, lol. You are correct that the baby would be sleeping next to Songo, in most areas throughout the world parents share the bed with children that are still nursing, so until the child is 3 or 4.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 00:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Something tells me Sango and Miroku will be meeting Kagome's family before this whole darn thing is resolved, LOL. I love your bits of real history you put in there, giving this story a definitive timeline. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2010 21:26 EDT
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at least their friends are going to be living as long as they are. poor family waiting for their daughters, just because some tree has a crush on a married woman. *shakes head* --poor inuyasha has to be the brunt of shippou's pranks *giggles* ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2010 13:24 EDT
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i love it when i have reason to giggle while reading a story!! LOL ♥
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2010 12:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay good, talismans are in place. Blur through the next 30 years, here we come!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2010 20:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your idea for how to extend their lives. I'm sorry I can't help you with your question about Buddhism without at least doing some research of my own first. Maybe somebody else will know the answer. Either way, I think the way you have your chapter written is just fine, although it was more like a teaser instead of a chapter. Shame on you! But on the other hand, thank you for getting at least a little something done and posted! LOL. Either way, great work, and I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2010 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah-hah! I knew something like that was going to happen! As intelligent as Kagome and Sango were trying to be, I was screaming in my mind "Set a determined interval of time between visits!" Such a simple thing went completely unnoticed, obviously on purpose, so that you could pull that nice little twist there at the end. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 07:41 EDT
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oh no! i had forgotten what happened to kaede. so now that kagome has to take her place it was sweet that you had inuyasha reassure her like he did. ♥
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 10:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry life's been hell lately. Glad you were able to get a little something out there for us. I understand that this was originally part of a longer chapter that's not yet finished, but I like where you stopped it. Though this chapter's a bit short, it still read like a complete chapter to me. Looking forward to when you can finish up the other half, not to mention all of the next chapters to come as well. This is a really good story, so keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2010 00:45 EST
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lets all wish for the goblins to take him away-- dude reminds me of jereth with his games and such... he's blond, does he sing too? (sorry, sorry, i've been reading a bit too many 'labyrinth' fics) ♣ so the guy is a plant and was once part of naraku a.k.a. the 'flesh'. he didn't say what he wanted with those women or what his great 'game' is. he frustrates me too and i'm resisting the urge to imagine on of the girls stomping her foot and exclaiming, "it's not fair!" ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2010 01:13 EST
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now the scary stuff is happening *shivers* one wonders why they're studying women, or something to do with women? ♥
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