| "My Succubus Wife" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2010 02:51 EST
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I'm so happy to be reading this story!! I loved the first one, and I'm excited to see this one unfold. The birds and bees scene was adorable! There's a lot of different story lines developing, and I'm excited to see how they'll finally come together. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2010 01:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that miroku has gotten himself in quite a mess... looks like inuyasha is better and things were looking good for kagome & inuyasha... until their talk with yumi... kagome & inuyasha have lots of issues to settle and talk about... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2010 20:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HAVE READ BOTH STORIES N THEY R AWSOME....I THINK YOU ARE A AWSOME WIRTER.........PLZ CONTINUE!!!!
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Reviewed By: rainstorm61879(NSI) On: February 16, 2010 03:17 EST
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hmm...so is heoneof the five or not .... you leave more questions than you answered with the update :) just the way i like it lol. I love stories that have plots and twists and leave you with more questions every chapter till the end when it all starts falling into place
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2010 22:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that because of kagome's distraction kikyo and inuyasha have to pay the consequences... what will happen between inuyasha and kagome now... looks like kikyo recovered... who was talking to inuyasha?... who did inuyasha release?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2010 21:01 EST
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this was the best chapter yet!! so much drama! update soon please ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2010 13:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that with inuyasha spending time with yumi he was approached by the bad guys... why did inuyasha's card get denied though... so kouga is back and just talked to kagome... but with kagome distracted kikyo was the one to pay the price... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 13:52 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so sango has gotten herself into another kind of trouble... seems that kagome and the others have started their search... but looks like the guy knows who they are but they don't know who he is... and inuyasha is spending time with yumi... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2010 13:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha and kagome have patched things up for now... and sango did what myoga mentioned to her about her contract with the demon... will she make contact?... so miroku is slowly realizing his situation with sango... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2009 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that there's still trouble in paradise for the couples... looks like things are just going to get worse until things get any better... what will kagome do now?... how will she deal with her clan's troubles - her family - inuyasha - her daughter?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2009 04:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that sango and miroku's situation has gotten worse... nice that inuyasha and kagome are happy again... how will inuyasha & kagome help sango & miroku?... looks like someone is targeting the succubus?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: lil6ter [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2009 11:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is wow! I read the first story, just as you recommended, and I loved it. The second one is even better so far! It is dealing with the reality that most people tend to forget about when it comes to couples. After the I-do’s it isn’t always all fun and games, and I love how you are taking a look at their relationships a few years after commitments have been made, and are showing real problems…well…as real as they can be with a succumbs thrown into the mix. Lovin’ the story! Keep up the good work, and I eagerly await your next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2009 04:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha & kagome aren't the only ones with issues even sango & miroku are having problems... what's going to happen to the two couples now... looks like miroku has decided on what he's going to do... will sango tell them about her past... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2009 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that inuyasha & kagome got married and have a daughter now... but looks like the marriage isn't going as smooth... good that they're talking but the issue isn't closed yet... what will inuyasha do?... what will kagome do?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2009 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant keep going!
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