| "My Succubus Wife" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2010 22:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that because of kagome's distraction kikyo and inuyasha have to pay the consequences... what will happen between inuyasha and kagome now... looks like kikyo recovered... who was talking to inuyasha?... who did inuyasha release?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2010 21:01 EST
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this was the best chapter yet!! so much drama! update soon please ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2010 13:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that with inuyasha spending time with yumi he was approached by the bad guys... why did inuyasha's card get denied though... so kouga is back and just talked to kagome... but with kagome distracted kikyo was the one to pay the price... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 13:52 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so sango has gotten herself into another kind of trouble... seems that kagome and the others have started their search... but looks like the guy knows who they are but they don't know who he is... and inuyasha is spending time with yumi... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2010 13:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha and kagome have patched things up for now... and sango did what myoga mentioned to her about her contract with the demon... will she make contact?... so miroku is slowly realizing his situation with sango... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2009 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that there's still trouble in paradise for the couples... looks like things are just going to get worse until things get any better... what will kagome do now?... how will she deal with her clan's troubles - her family - inuyasha - her daughter?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2009 04:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that sango and miroku's situation has gotten worse... nice that inuyasha and kagome are happy again... how will inuyasha & kagome help sango & miroku?... looks like someone is targeting the succubus?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: lil6ter [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2009 11:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is wow! I read the first story, just as you recommended, and I loved it. The second one is even better so far! It is dealing with the reality that most people tend to forget about when it comes to couples. After the I-do’s it isn’t always all fun and games, and I love how you are taking a look at their relationships a few years after commitments have been made, and are showing real problems…well…as real as they can be with a succumbs thrown into the mix. Lovin’ the story! Keep up the good work, and I eagerly await your next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2009 04:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha & kagome aren't the only ones with issues even sango & miroku are having problems... what's going to happen to the two couples now... looks like miroku has decided on what he's going to do... will sango tell them about her past... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2009 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that inuyasha & kagome got married and have a daughter now... but looks like the marriage isn't going as smooth... good that they're talking but the issue isn't closed yet... what will inuyasha do?... what will kagome do?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2009 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant keep going!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2009 16:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting - great sequel update... so inuyasha proposed to kagome and she accepted... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2009 12:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Man this is so kool a sequel!!! Plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2009 05:51 EST
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im so glad the sequel is up and going!!!! update soon please ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2009 05:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! A sequel! That's great ^^ Really liked the prologue, great to see a wee proposal in there ^^ Your writing always gets me hooked, can't wait to see how the story progresses!!
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