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| "Within You" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: gwineveve301 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2011 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo new chapter! I say post whenever you can, people have lives and college is busy lol | Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2011 19:27 EDT
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i never cared for jerry's show but he's very intelligent and has really great closing remarks -- i was looking for one where he talks about stupid people trying to keep a person who loves someone else -- lolz... ♥ glad you're back love! been meaning to get back to you but rl is a fickle lover. | Reviewed By: Lokoramen On: April 13, 2011 00:14 EDT
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i agree with SplendentGoddess. | Title: POST
Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2011 08:04 EDT
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DUHHH!!! you should not keep this fabulous little story to yourself!!!! NO WAYYY!!!!! not a good idea! I'M SOO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: sunnymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2011 22:27 EDT
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U should publish it! :) | Title: Share the Beauty
Reviewed By: Your Adoring Fan On: March 30, 2011 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have had the same thing happend to me so many times. How i wish i could keep my little secret of pleasure just to myself, to not indulge others in my heavenly pleasure. But should i be selfish? I think not...because there is another higher level of pleasure you could obtain from the secret. It is to share with others as they bask in all its glory created by a heavenly being...YOU. You created the symphony of the tale and its beautiful effects on others. Feel how everyone bows to your world of creativity, beauty and rare melodic words. I have been inspired in this harsh real world by your writing. You, who are so young, yet so wise with words. Please, share your serene and heavenly tales with those that need it and crave it. One like me... | Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2011 22:57 EDT
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what SplendentGoddess said. if you want it to be published then you have to keep it to yourself until that time you can get it published, otherwise publishers won't touch it. ♥ | Reviewed By: Shan666 On: March 29, 2011 16:58 EDT
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Please post your new story, it sounds wonderful!! | Title: White Rose
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2011 21:11 EDT
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That was very brave of you, asking all of us what we wanted, what you should do. You will likely get many selfish people telling you to share solely for their own interest in the story - but is that not why we write? To share our stories with others? Then the question becomes, whose selfishness is more well-placed? Ours or yours? Is it wrong of you to want to keep the story to yourself, or is it wrong of us to demand that you share it? I would say, as for myself, of course I would love for you to share your story. I would very much love to read it. But at the same time, I do understand the desire to keep certain projects to oneself. I think the greatest deciding factor should be this: do you intend to attempt officially publishing the completed version? If you truly, honestly want to try and publish this new story once it is completed, then for your own sake, for the modern world we live in and legalities and plagiarism and all of that nasty business, I would recommend that you temporarily keep the story to yourself until such time that it is sharable to us all in printed form. Otherwise, if you feel deep in your heart that it will most likely forever remain a fanfic, forever merely digital on your computer and nothing more, then I do think that sharing it with others online would be the right thing to do as opposed to keeping it forever as your own secret. What use is a gallery of paintings the world will never see? So this is not truly a question of whether or not others will read this new story of yours, but merely how, and when. Ultimately, the decision must be yours, but that is my opinion. You shouldn't keep it solely to yourself forever, but if it shall one day become a real book, I can wait until that time for the unveiling. | Title: omg! loved it!!!
Reviewed By: WyckedFrankie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2011 00:23 EST
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I even loved the drama. It was perfect :) One thing I have to point out because it's in my nature is, you got angle and angel mixed up but it's cool. I can't wait to read more!!! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 22:10 EST
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Yay! Wonderful update! We are nearly back full circle, I see, and I think for the most part all of the questions have already been cleared up, as far as what happens/happened to get us back to where we started, although I am definitely looking forward to that glimpse of Kagome's thoughts you said would be in the next chapter as we finally get COMPLETELY back to the beginning. I'm glad Kaede screwed herself by botching the timing in her lie of how far along she was...karmic justice at its finest, and it got rid of any guilt Inuyasha would have otherwise felt for leaving Kaede, because obviously if she could lie like that, then just like he himself had realized, she wasn't who he thought she was. Definitely looking forward to Kagome's thoughts, like I just said, but I'm REALLY looking forward to the chapters AFTER next, where we can see how the story progresses from the stage you set way back when. I understand that 'real life' is going to try to be a thorn in your side, but update as swiftly as you can, you hear? If you can't because of life then you just can't, but no procrastinating allowed! LOL | Reviewed By: AmiFire Chopstixx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 21:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this chapter was such a roller coaster! First I'm sad (Inuyasha stays with Kaede), then I'm happy (Inuyasha realizes Kaede lied), then I'm REALLY happy (Kagome and Inuyasha happy for a little while), then I'm scared (Kouga), then I'm MAD (I WANT TO THROW KAGOME'S FATHER OFF A CLIFF), then I'm happy/sad, and by the end I just want to cry T.T I loved this chapter so much, and I'm glad Inuyasha did realize that Kagome was lying at the end! I'll just keep hoping that everything gets better in the next update (please? :D)! | Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2011 13:52 EST
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cgCt6bSu89w *shakes head sadly* ♥ | Reviewed By: ahh!! On: December 30, 2010 09:21 EST
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i'm back for a second review so i can give my question! ha. how long is this story supposed to be? chapter wise? like, if you're not positive, could you give a rouch estimation?(: thanks! and please keep writing! this story is one of my all time favorites(: | Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2010 15:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
remember me?? :P haha i've been gone longer than you have. how's your book by the way!??! gosh, thats pretty freaking interesting, how come you chose kaede instead of kikyo?? OHHHHHH alright this is my question!!! how long until the prologue plays out into the story?? this is really interesting by the way (: i love your writing. | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] |
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