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 Reviewed By: meganramirez13 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 13, 2010 17:25 EDT
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please update soon!!! this is one of my favorite stories and i have been waiting forever for you to update!! i almost cried when i saw that you did!!!
 Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 08, 2010 10:43 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Awesome Update!! Love this story..
 Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 08, 2010 10:42 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Awesome Update!! Love this story..
 Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 07, 2010 21:13 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol. Kouga is an alternative personality...
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 06, 2010 17:02 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things have gotten really complicated... so kagome has another personality inside her which is kouga?... how did that happen?... but he got caught with kikyo... and looks like he's gotten her in trouble with inuyasha and now they're not together anymore... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
 Reviewed By: Hakudoshi's gurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 06, 2010 15:51 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I loved this chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Oh and, AHHHHHHH DAMN YOU KOUGA!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Tora_Tsubasa [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 06, 2010 12:26 EDT
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I'm so happy you decided to continue working on this story! It's one of the few that's really got me caught up in it's interwoven threads. Good job!
 Reviewed By: kagome313(nsi)  On: September 06, 2010 08:03 EDT
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You tickle me with this chapter! lol. I enjoyed it, especially the new development that came with it. I can't blv kags has an alter ego, and from what i read Kouga wasn't the only one? =O And also, who was it that took her body. Cuz first i thought it was Kouga but then he said he protected her or some shit like that? Did he rape her to get in her body? And it sucks so bad that when he takes over her body, she loses control and doesnt remember anythi,g yet Kouga sees it all (He shud feel it all too - jus to fuck with the lack of manhood he has lol) Love the update and hope to read more soon =)
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 06, 2010 00:17 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting update. I can't believe Kikyou left out telling Inuyasha that Kagome had asked her to call her 'Kouga', that would've been a big clue! But then again, I guess that's why you didn't include that part, 'cause it's still too soon for Inuyasha to figure out what's going on. I'm still trying to figure out what's going on, though it's clear Kagome isn't crazy. But how the hell did she end up carrying Kouga (and apparently some other people's) souls inside of her? This is a universe of youkai magic, though the youkai have to live in secret, so it makes sense that people might think Kagome was crazy if she couldn't freely explain what was really going on, but being a hanyou in hiding himself, Inuyasha would probably understand if she gave him a chance. Really looking forward to seeing how you continue this.
 Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 04, 2010 11:05 EDT
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Was Kagome...? Is she ok? Why is she talking to herself? AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! To many questions!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 01, 2010 06:13 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So Kagome has a Gollum? Great work!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 25, 2010 00:40 EDT
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a mans voice? is she MPD? am i forgetting something from earlier in the story!?! OH NO! now i have to re- read! lol. I actually have a friend who is MPD and when she switches her voice changes along with her mannerism. You can tell just by the the way she talks if she switches to the "male" inside her.
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 20, 2010 01:54 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Great update! It's definitely looking like Kagome was raped, which I think we all already concluded prior to this latest chapter, but what I wasn't expecting was that weird LOTR split-personality moment at the end there. As I see it, there are two distinctively different ways that this could possibly go. One, Kagome is really, bonafide crazy (not that that means there isn't hope for her and Inuyasha if he can help her get better) and two, considering that this is a universe with demons living in secret, there could also possibly be something more real behind Kagome's "man" voice. Either way, I can't wait to see what happens next!
 Reviewed By: Hakudoshi's gurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 19, 2010 15:55 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Miroku is hella funny!!! Please update soon.
 Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 18, 2010 10:42 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was good and yay inuyasha and kagome are together!!!!! Plz update ASAP PLZ!!!!! Great job and i cant wait to find out what happens next!!!!
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