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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2010 07:21 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was sooo sweet!! I am in love with this fic!!! I especially like how in a way kags n kikyou's personalities are switched! And also how open inuyasha is with his feelings towards kags (like how it is with kikyou in the anime/manga n reversed for kags with how he closed off his feelings most time)... so cool!!! xD... Theeen i feel like he's diggin a ditch of shiit for himself - goin on a date with kikyo(leadin her on and also liking some things bout her), and still askin kags out on a date. tsk tsk. Oh and did kags get raped? Or something close to that? You really cant judge ppl when u dont kno shyte bout them (like how she dresses and all) I always have a feeling of sadness wash over me when i think closely about kags way of living/the way she dresses n everything. AWESOME fic here. I'd i'll give u growth balls xD So get to updating once u got to growing them balls =P (ugh am one to tlk since its been forever since i updated
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2010 05:33 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome and inuyasha are thinking about each other... looks like something happened to kagome before - what though?... so inuyasha might have feelings for kagome but kikyo is somehow trying to get with him... sweet moments between kagome and inuyasha... good that inuyasha showed kagome his ears - cute... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! yeah the tsunami warning on saturday was really something...
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2010 01:12 EST
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I know the stupid emails blasts are my fault. The format kept coming out weird since MM.org doesn't take docx. I tried .rtf and .pdf and everything else. I just settled for plant txt so excuse the weird markings and lack of italics or structure
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Reviewed By: faygo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 23:22 EST
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I've been folowing this story for new chapters, and recieved several emails about you updating it, yet when I pull it up on mm.org, it says you haven't updated. Don't know if you know this or not, but I thought I'd point it out. I really am excited about more chapters so I hope you can get it fixed!! thank you! :)
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Reviewed By: just a person On: February 26, 2010 03:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is AWESOME i love the story line and its great! I wish you could post more chapters quicker! Love the story, you're really good!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover21901 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2010 16:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this was my fav chappy lol I cant wait for more plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Inulover21901 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2010 16:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this was my fav chappy lol I cant wait for more plz update soon
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2010 03:41 EST
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I'm a bit confused. What band is Kagome actually listening to? In chapter 1 she is wearing a "Deadless" shirt and referred to it a Grunge. In ch2 Inuyasha wonders if she is listening to "Deathless" and refers to it as Old Rock and then in ch5 they both call it "Deathless" and refer to it as Hard Rock. So I'm wondering do you mean, the Seattle Punk band "DeadLess", the Japanese Metal Band "Deadless Muss", the album "Deathless" by "Throwdown" an American Metal Band or the Saudi Death Metal band "Deathless Anguish"? Otherwise I just love this quirky little story. I also can't help but wonder about Kagome, since her mom was paranoid about her having a boy in her room and that the last time it ended badly. Combine that with her clothing that completely conceals her body, and her general fear/inability to make a connection with others makes me think that she might have either been or come close to being raped. And one more question. If Inuyasha wears a sock cap all the time, does she know he has dog ears... err does he even have dog ears? I'm not sure if you ever specified that he was hanyou.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 15:39 EST
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You're doing really good at keeping to that. Stick with it and update soon please!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 05:54 EST
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Awww,this chapter just made me feel all *squishy* inside..lol Isn't young love grand. I'm glad you made Inu realize that his secret crush IS Kagome but oh no what will he do about Kikyo and I'm torn because her character is actually cool. Well this was just "SWEET" so until next time..read ya later and Great Writing
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 01:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I love how she's always falling out of her shoes. Girl needs to find a pair that fit! And I love, love, LOVE InuYasha and Kagome getting closer...especially since he knows "Sketch pad girl" is her now, but I wonder what'll happen with Inu/Kik's planned date, why Kagome's mom was so worried about a boy coming over, and what IY wrote in the back of her sketchbook. The characters are so adorable! I really like how shy Kagome is...and I totally cracked up when she gave InuYasha a "disgusted look," cuz who the hell comes out and asks that?? xD And I SQUEEed like crazy when I got to "That's not true. I want her." So cute! I'm excited for what'll happen next! This is such a sweet, quirky story! ~Am :D Btw, I like your username, too! My boyfriend is a Capricorn ;)
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: February 21, 2010 00:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for answering my question and I'm in love with your story I can't wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: Hoshizora0 On: February 21, 2010 00:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! XD I especially liked how this chapter ended, with Kagome falling out of her shoes and all. :D I wonder what Inuyasha wrote...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2010 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha is enjoying being in art class... he finally found out that the girl he's looking for is actually kagome... looks like kagome and inuyasha are somewhat friends for now i guess... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: inukagome4life On: February 20, 2010 19:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Awesome Update =) I love how you ended it! Is Souta going to be in this fic as well? (just wondering because he wasn't mentioned while at Kagome's House) I hope Inu & Kag start getting closer in the next chapter! Update Soon =)
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