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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2010 14:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so inuyasha and kagome are together now... looks like sango and kikyo are together behind miroku's back... but miroku is getting suspicious... what's wrong with kagome... seems that kagome's got some secrets that inuyasha will slowly find out about?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2010 13:11 EDT
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effin review got cut off!!! ugh I wonder what's up with Kags... I mean is she that far gone in her problems? Can't wait to see how she'll open up to Inuyasha and trust him - also if he'll be patient enuff to wait for her... And Sango needs to get her shit 2gether
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2010 13:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought u gave up on this fic! *sniff sniff* But am so glad u didnt!! THIS IS AWESOME!! I was like 'No fucking way!' When i saw the relationship tween Sango and Kikyou. I hope kikyou doesnt get all hating on Sango or pent up for revenge since it does seem she's pretty serious bout her relationship with Sango o.o Then kags been rape!! Jus say it out loud so i can be more than positive xD And i wonder what dream Inuyasha had?? And why was the red digits on the radio reminded him of the dream? Was there blood? rape blood?! LOOOVE SESSHY and MIROKU!! *licks them slowly* Jus gotta love Miro - i hope he finds out bout Sango.. it's not fair to him... i feel bad for him
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Inu-N-Kags On: April 02, 2010 17:58 EDT
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I absolutely love this story and the direction that you're going in.Keep up the good work! Im ready for you to come up with the next chapter, so Please Update Soon!!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 22:36 EDT
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OH MY GOD! LOVE IT! please update soon! I cant wait to find out what happens next! I wonder what happened in kagomes past?
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Reviewed By: Lady E [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know as review I have done my share(like reviewing in over a month...) but you should really update this story. Kagome is obviously beginning to blossom and I would love to find out more about her past. *starts biting fingernails* This update will definitely make me breathe and huge sigh of relief and I'm sure many of your other readers will agree. So on behalf of my self and your many reviewers...U-P-D-A-T-E!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 19:49 EDT
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Ha! I was right! Update soon please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: March 21, 2010 00:38 EDT
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Hey sorry I haven't review in while I just got in to grey's anatomy so I've been watching it and reading fanficton but anyway I love your story it's getting good so update soon.
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Reviewed By: kagome313(nsi) On: March 19, 2010 10:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An update!! YAY! Jus wat i need in my atm-shitty life *rolls eyes* Now, I REALLY LOVE INUYASHA!!! Everything in this fic ur writing is so refreshing! And i adore the scene in art class - it was so cute (tear tear). And i like how u made kags n sango meet.. it was quite natural. btw, now am more eager to find out bout kags. She's bulimic? Why?!?! I'm jus formulating so many things yet i wont kno unless u out right say it *sniffles* i need to know!!! Dx I kno this is unrelated in so many ways but am watchin Moonlight and its so awesome!!! *___* lol (cough cough) So yh. I love the friendship between sango and kikyou, and i wanna see how things'll play out when they find out the mystery girl. Plus, inu kissing kags in class will cause for some good gossiping =]... Cant wait for ur next update!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2010 09:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that inuyasha is defending and protecting kagome... and that inuyasha is sweet with kagome too... seems that inuyasha got miroku to talk to kagome now... looks like kagome met sango too but sango doesn't really know her... good that inuyasha supported kagome in art class... so they are together now... what's next... hope inuyasha will ask kagome about her past... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2010 19:13 EDT
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You're welcome! What happened four years ago? Did she get...?
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2010 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I'm really enjoying this story alot! It's SO original. The way that InuYasha is not written as a betrayer/two-timer or as a male slut/walking STD's poster child who treats women as toilet paper! Kikyou as an actual person and not this queen slut/B***h out to destroy the world.. or at least Kagome. The twist with Sango/Miroku being rabbit-humping lovers is Wicked! Another original plot! And Sango not being instantaneous soul-sister friends with Kagome is a delight!! It's Very refreshing! I was quite OMGosh! with Miroku trying to tell InuYasha to treat Kikyou right because it meant he'd get no action from Sango! And Miroku!! WOW!!! You are the one of the Very RARE few who have written him without making Sexual Harassment/Abuse (ie amount of unwanted/non-consensual touching=breathing/blinking)look like it's sooo 'wonderfully cool, funny and totally sexy'. One of the reasons why I can't stand Miroku - and you have me enjoying his character. This story feels so realistic! Though I do have a couple of sneaky suspicions with Kagome's past but even if I'm right you'll be doing it in a refreshing new way! What else would be completely original... if it was Sango who became a teen mother - normally in the thousands of fics out there it's always Kagome who ends up being the unwed, underaged, single teen mother. What else gets me squeaking in delight- you have Kagome being down-to-earth... meaning she isn't this OMG!! GORGEOUS MODEL!! OMG!! person. No, she's considered the laughing stock weirdo and unattractive to the males.. Especially with your Shock Bomb of MIROKU not having his hands glued to her ass. And yet... to InuYasha he sees the beauty that is within her. The slow and rich development between Inu/Kag relationship is prefect. The way she reacted to having InuYasha come over to her house and model for her was great! The one thing that seems out of place is the way Kagome is always popping out of her shoes. It's like a Popeye scene where he pops the villain. All in all this is so delightfully refreshing! KUDOS and BRAVO! I look forward to the next installment!
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2010 01:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story and enjoyed you dragging the 'bet' thing through the dirt a little, that was always one story theme that irritated me to no end. And there is nothing wrong with a sudden random lemon, lol, I doubt anyone would complain about that. Your spelling could use some work but your grammar is decent. All you really need to do is grab a good beta/proofreader. Plus I would suggest that if you have auto-correct that you turn it off unless you intend to read it through 2 or 3 times to check and make sure all the right words are used. But other than that, I like the idea of the story, the dialogue is believable and sounds like a person is talking, and the theme is intriguing. So overall, good job and I await the next chapter with anticipation.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2010 10:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first off - dont apologize for random lemons (hint hint) lol, and secondly, I LOVE THIS UPDATE!!! The date was sooo cute, and i love how he caved to please Kags n also how he was so absolute on not letting kags pay - men and their pride xD. I wonder how kikyou would react to hearing Inu having an interest in Kags. I feel like i'll see a bitch mode in the future, but its sorter her fault - i'm still pissed that she didnt ive inu a second chance, yet i'm still happy she didnt. And the KISS!!! awwww - ur story jus having my awww-ing my ass off!! It was sooo sweet! I WANT INUYASHA *rolls around on my bed hugging my pillow* Ok ok, was kags a victim of a bet? And the guy forced himself on her? If she needed a shrink she must have been messed up pretty badly. Its sad that what ever happened to her in the past has affected her in the sense that she'll always be skeptical about ppl being nice to her - she'd jus question question and question... it's so sad. Especially if a guy comes along who doesnt need any of that, but would also end up being the victim cuz of some past douche's act.... UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN!!! And dont bother urself - the sesshy u have is soooooo new and fresh!! I LOVE HIM - even tho he's creepy, but he creep me in the good way - get what am saying? LMAO ... jk jk xDDD
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2010 07:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha & kagome's date went ok with certain ups and downs... they did some talking but not enough to let inuyasha know more about kagome's past... hope they talk some more... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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