| "A Damaged Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: ritsukun On: July 21, 2010 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE DO NOT make this a Sess/Kag Pairing I BEG YOU!!! I am really tired of all of the stories if Sess/Kag everywhere. PLEASE MAKE THIS A INU/KAG
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Reviewed By: Josilin Stafford On: July 21, 2010 11:51 PDT
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PLEASE DO NOT make this a Sess/Kag Pairing I BEG YOU!!! I know Inuyasha did wrong but he's trying to make it right and both of them are suffering because of it so PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE DON"T make it Sess/Kag
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 10:14 PDT
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At this point in the story, with everything thats happened, I myself would like to see Kagome with Sesshomaru, even if its on a temporary basis. I know I voted for demon Inuyasha to be with Kagome... but I'm leaning towards Sesshomaru now. Of course you're bound to get people that still want her with Inuyasha (you could always have them share her, but thats another discussion that won't fit in one review). Back to reviewing, this chapter was short, but as usual wonderfully written. Keep it up! Your Loyal Reviewer, -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: asuna414 On: July 21, 2010 10:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am enjoying this. I vote for D.IY/K.
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Reviewed By: not on my computer and forgot my password On: July 21, 2010 08:20 PDT
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i vote i/k or if you want to change it make it a polyandry fic http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u7HKmu3eMEk -- in manga (the only true canon) he calls her 'shard detector' -once- (miroku when they first met asked him if they were lovers, he gave her a valued title, in that era woman were given no worth-- she wanted him to call her 'friend'). he compared her to kikyou -only at first, two or three times max. the way that 'fandom' has blasphemed inuyasha is shameful. in manga sesshoumaru was the mastermind in the mu-onna deception and he is shown as having the most evil delight in hurting his brother with torturing the impersonation of his mother (probably did such things to isayoi and inuyasha when she was alive-- that is why inuyasha found it so easy to believe). --if you still want her to be with sesshoumaru add him to the mix as she needs the protection of both males. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d4yjrDSvze0 --gin
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Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: July 21, 2010 02:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D.IY/K pairing please. No Sesh/Kag, there's been too much of that lately. Longer chaps would be appreciated too. :)
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 01:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always another excellent chapter to an awesome story.You have a lot of talent and a great imagination..I'd vote the >> SESSH/KAG pairing
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Reviewed By: ilona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2010 00:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
right now i want to scream about the shortness of the chapter and the cliffy you left us with :P i love your story, and either way you make it, sesskag or inukag it doesnt matter, although what do you think about inu/kag/sess? i see it pretty often around and when they writer is good, the story does not feel ridiculous as i thought it might. But if i were to choose a pairing i would choose inukag and not sesskag :) hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Dott On: July 10, 2010 15:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the path that ur going is great! ^.^ i love it! the pain, heartache! yet the love awe! its beautiful writing. Yes! let us see what u want us to see. i like that ur letting the reader know Inuyasha's pain for what he's done, dont rush it like other fic's do, in the forgiving area. ur a very creative writer and i love this story a lot! --Dott
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: rambo328 On: July 07, 2010 01:33 PDT
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Hey, I just wanted to tell you I've been reading your inuyasha series. It is VERY good. You mentioned in last chapter posted so far you not getting the encouraging reviews, so congrates this is the first review i've given. Your story is very different especially from inuyasha's side, but I really like it. It's sad, but I like how Kagome's all Sess is my protector. Makes me feel bad for Inuyasha, but same time like how it can throw that jealous out plus the fact Sess does protect her from him. It's very good and I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 08:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha, he has to live with what he has done. I think Kagomes behavior is realistic. I know I would be afraid of him. I also would need time to even think about forgiving such an act. Great writing. So looking forward to next update.
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2010 05:39 PDT
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Reviews, Reviews. Many times I have read how reviews help authors, and make getting rid of writers block easier, but when I attempt to write a review, my mind freezes up like a glacier. somehow just saying how much I am enjoying a story seems pointless, but then I realize, if I don't say something, how will you know I am a return customer. I enjoy your stories, Kj, and am also enjoying watching your development as a writer, your style is getting smoother, and the conversations less stilted, the storyline is flowing better. Your doing great. Keep your muse close, and your computer closer. As long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading, OK?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 23:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great updates... lots of drama... glad that inuyasha was able to help kagome but sad developments for both of them... what will happen now?... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 08:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL thanks Awesome story love the new chapters keep up the good work.. the reason I think Kagome should go with Sesshoumaru is because 1 Inu has been a real abusive SOB to Kag 2 he'd still run to Kikyo if she were there 3 if it were me the minute he hit and tried to kill I would lose love & trust I don't care if your female or male once someone does that to you can never really trust them again and the next time they did it it would be worse..Please let it be ---> SESSH/KAG
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Title: A Damaged Soul
Reviewed By: Nabikitendo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 06:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome. I love this story plot you have going. I also love the whole Sesshomaru/Inuyasha thing. I also understand what you mean about reviews. I am posting a story and I have no reviews lol. Oh well, I still say your story is absolutely cool. But if I can vote I want it to end with a Kagome/Inuyasha pairing please. If not that's cool too. Thanks so much for taking the time to write and post this story.
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