| "A Damaged Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 00:36 PDT
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Well you can always count on me for a review! Though I must say.. I'm only feeling bad for Inuyasha's demon half.. Inuyasha himself, not so much. I'm not a very forgiving person- at least not like Kagome. But that comes from years of harassment I suppose. Still loving the story, even though I say that Inuyasha deserves every bit of pain he gets (still feel bad for his demon side though- the human side can go kiss Naraku's ass). See you next update, -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2010 07:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! please update.
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Reviewed By: blue_light121 On: June 15, 2010 03:47 PDT
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Okay, I'm a newbie to the story because I just read it and I wanted to stop in and say I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! It's different, with the whole Inuyasha beating Kagome thing, and Kagome being killed then Sesshomaru reviving her while Inuyasha just watched the whole situation, and Inuyasha going full demon. I like different. It's just completely unexpected, but it works at the same time. You have GOT to update again soon. It's just to good to let hang for too long. Again great work and keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2010 17:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You always look forward to MY reviews? Aw- that made me the happiest woman alive. It was short again, and the writing style was wonderful as usual, but the format of the text got messed up by MM... or it might just be my browser though. Even though I'm still pissed at Inuyasha and think he deserves worse than the self-loathing...but that may just be me (though I doubt it). He still needs to do some serious ass-kissing though. By the way- was the word 'barrio' supposed to be 'barrier'? I looked it up and all I got was that it was a city in Spain so..yeah. Your loyal reviewer -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 23:28 PDT
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No!Inuyasha so does not deserve forgiveness...he freakin watched her get killed!!!are you seriously pairing them up?
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Title: You should pick...
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...it took me a whole day to read this story and I really freakin loved this story!!!!! now as for who should be with who.... personally i vote for inuyasha and kagome to be with each other....but don't make it to easy for Inuyasha....he should have to do so many things to get her back to make it an interesting thing to see him get her back by earning her trust again....now i also vote for demon inuyasha/kagome/sesshomaru.....because i thats like my favorite 3 some of them all!!!!!! but yeah!!!!! DEMON INUYASHA AND KAGOME ALL THE WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 12:36 PDT
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Your best friend, seriously? Aw well I'm glad I made you that happy with my review. I've found almost all my best friends on fanfiction sites. Great update too btw. I like the way you pulled off the scene of what was going on in Kagome's head. I do hope, however, that when she fully wakes up she doesn't automatically go back to Inuyasha...that would just...no. It would be too fast. He should have to jump hoops around the world before she trusts him again. There's a big difference between having compassion and pity for someone and trusting them. Seriously, he basically KILLED her.. that needs major ass-kissing before she lets him near her (emotionally or otherwise) again. It may be the all-forgiving Kagome we're talking about, but still. Anyway now that I'm done rambling, great update, glad your on a roll, and can't wait to see more. -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 09:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I havent read this whole story yet.B but from what I've read so far it's awesome.keep up the good work..LOL THANKS
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Reviewed By: Deedee4theWin On: June 08, 2010 16:57 PDT
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I really enjoy this story :) Pleeease update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 11:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short yes, but not at all lacking in its usual show of talent. For whether or not you should show whats going on in Kagome's head... well you should and you shouldn't. My suggestion is not to openly say whats going on but to strongly hint at whatever's happening. As a writer myself I find that doing it that way keeps an element of mystery which keeps people wanting to know, thus keeping them coming back. Hope the idea helps you, even if it only inspires an idea of your own. -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 08:08 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright That was so great Inuyasha and Kagome really are perfect together! Great work update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2010 23:47 PDT
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Sess/Kag as a pairing definitly...Inuyasha has abused her and hurt her way to much to be actually and realistically forgiven. Sess has been protecting and caring to Kagome which is what she really needs. also you have written her distrust of inu...how can a relationship between Inu and Kag work with all that baggage and especially the fact that he watched her die and didnt do anything to save her? and she knows that he did nothing. so seriously How could you actually write a good Inu/Kag fic with that background? and besides I'm a hardcore Sess/Kag fan :D
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Reviewed By: meganramirez13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2010 21:55 PDT
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You HAVE to make this an Inu/Kag I mean Sesshomaru was there for her and all but he's more like a big brother than a lover. My votes for INU/KAG ALL THE WAY! great story by the way.
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Reviewed By: knife thrower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2010 11:30 PDT
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Keep up the great work when you get a chance, I'll keep checking on this story, because I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: knife thrower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2010 11:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for all three to be together. If not, then Sesshomaru/Kagome. Because without Sess' protection, it is asking just too much to trust InuYasha with her emotional and physical well-being. But you are making demon InuYasha so woebegone, I am having a hard time saying she should totally forget him.
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