| "Happi's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Title: CH 17
Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2011 08:54 EDT
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Kuno's Haiku: Flexible morals Opaque mind shrouded in mist Humiliation waits ♥♂♀♂♀♂♀♥ Great chapter! |
Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2011 07:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plan for Kuno seems to be rather complicated but I can't wait to see the outcome. As to some crossover neighbors my first thought was Makoto Kino since she lives alone, but she probably lives in Juuban. |
Reviewed By: deathgeonous [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2011 19:56 EST
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I really enjoyed this fic. This fic, and some of your other writings, have made me even finally join this site. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now. |
Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2010 06:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally some more after all this time. How about having some crossover characters live in Ranma's new apartment house? |
Reviewed By: Clouddancer1014 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2010 22:18 EST
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---Still waiting on on update, man! Where have you been? |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2010 08:45 EST
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And just knowing the saotome luck, this last one will be the hardest. Still, while it won't work out between the tendos (if Nabiki really does care, and isn't a stereotype here, she'll appear to be angry, but will get the final help Ranma needs, such as ending the legal issues of the engagement). On the other hand, what about Ryoga at this point? Might be ironic if he'd respect ranma for becoming a doctor, and his parents might be able to help him a bit (forever lost wandering doctors, helping anyone they run into? Hmmm, plot bunny) or instead use it as an excuse to run away (in which case he's just nuts). In any case, continue to update, ja ne.
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2010 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely love it.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 13:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice like always. I like the idea of Ranma learning magic.
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Title: Ch 13
Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 08:53 EDT
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Great chapter! Now Ranma can be a magical girl OR guy.
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2010 09:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent work. I don't think I've ever read a fic where Ranma is a reincarnated doctor.
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Title: Chaper 11
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2010 11:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not much happening, but I like it.
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Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2010 01:00 EDT
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Great chapter. Enjoyed it muchly.
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2010 06:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not much to say. I like it like always.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2010 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're doing really well with this. I hope you keep writing it. It's one of the better Ranma 1/2 fanfictions I have read so far. Don't be afraid to use numbers when you're doing your disclaimer, though.
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2010 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite an enjoyable read once again.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2010 06:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job.
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2010 07:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not much happening in this chapter. I liked it nevertheless.
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Title: ch7
Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 15:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 14:08 EDT
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Hmmm, ranma taking an interest in medicine? An interesting take, but within his scope of interest? Dunno, but worth a look. However, that thought did bring to mind a bit of a plot bunny (one I plan to use myself). Ranma/Team Mecical Dragon crossover, with Ranma as the legendary cardiac surgeon himself. Hmmm, vision training afterall, an interesting martial arts technique? Still, how do you want to handle ranma in this case, an internist, a mixture of traditional and western medicine? Something to consider. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 05:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent stuff like always.
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Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2010 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haiku fu: Gender bender-true Happosai IS Noriko A girl's feelings rise ‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼& #9786;♥☺‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺ ;‼☺♥☺‼ Great story so far!
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2010 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ranma/Happosai is not a common pairing. Can't wait to see where you're going with this.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2010 01:20 EDT
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chapter was not uploaded, only the title was there.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2010 10:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Keep up the good work.
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