| "Happi's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2010 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're doing really well with this. I hope you keep writing it. It's one of the better Ranma 1/2 fanfictions I have read so far. Don't be afraid to use numbers when you're doing your disclaimer, though.
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2010 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite an enjoyable read once again.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2010 06:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job.
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2010 07:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not much happening in this chapter. I liked it nevertheless.
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Title: ch7
Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 15:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 14:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, ranma taking an interest in medicine? An interesting take, but within his scope of interest? Dunno, but worth a look. However, that thought did bring to mind a bit of a plot bunny (one I plan to use myself). Ranma/Team Mecical Dragon crossover, with Ranma as the legendary cardiac surgeon himself. Hmmm, vision training afterall, an interesting martial arts technique? Still, how do you want to handle ranma in this case, an internist, a mixture of traditional and western medicine? Something to consider. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 05:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent stuff like always.
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Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2010 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haiku fu: Gender bender-true Happosai IS Noriko A girl's feelings rise ‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼& #9786;♥☺‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺ ;‼☺♥☺‼ Great story so far!
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2010 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ranma/Happosai is not a common pairing. Can't wait to see where you're going with this.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2010 01:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
chapter was not uploaded, only the title was there.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2010 10:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2010 23:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
Stupid cliffhangers. Oh well, it's an interesting start, and the next chapter should be VERY interesting for the effects. In any case, update again soon, ja ne.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 02:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothing to add to the review I gave you some time ago. It's interesting.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2010 23:57 EDT
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Hmmm, so far this sounds like a good setup, but no second chapter has been posted, only the prologue. Otherwise, could be good. Continue to update, ja ne.
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